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for Punish Me

by Sparrowhawk

person Rin
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG you need to continue.... please, please, please continue. It's so amazing.
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg I love this chapter. I can't stop reading the first paragraph in a light British accent. And please please PLEASE more angst-yaoi goodness PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?! I want to see Lucius' and Severus' fantasies fulfilled. <3
person Woodland Spirit
schedule September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY! More Please!
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just recently getting into the D/s fics, but i must admit i am enjoying your story. I am not knowledgable about the lifestyle, but enjoy reading up on it :) Thanks for sharing and i hope you update soon.
person blossoming art
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pretty pretty pretty please, please update soon? I could hardly bear it when you didn't update. This story is seriously amazing. I'm really enjoying it. I think I like the fact that Severus has had these feelings for Harry, and I suspect Harry has had some sort of complex feelings for Severus for a very long time and they're finally getting to act on them. Even though Harry's life seems to be in disarray, it is almost like a coming home for him when he's with Severus. Gah! Please update soon! Lovely writing and so descriptive, which is incredibly important in these fics. You can't just go off half-cocked when writing about this stuff, as is done all too often. While I'm like you and don't have much life experience with the lifestyle, I have read an awful lot on the subject and talked to quite a few people in the lifestyle. It's been such an education. I'm really liking where you're taking this, so please continue as soon as you can! <3
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love it. Its actually one of the few i have read that starts off good and not to the point where it makes me cringe at the thought of reading it.
Lovely story. I cannot wait till the next chapter.
person woodland spirit
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very good, hope to see another update soon.
person djaddict
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!!

So totally hot even without any actual sex involved. The connection forming between them is fantastic.

Can't wait for more!
person mnfm
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good! Please update soon.
person sarah999
schedule August 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Very well done. :D I can't wait for the next chapter, so I really hope you update soon. :D