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for Punish Me

by Sparrowhawk

schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a take that i can see harry in. It really shows severous and lucuious sadistic side i think all three will benifit. Plse update soon
person luv-blonde-bunny
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
okay i'm sure you've received mail on this already but here's my two cents anyway: there's really not that big of a difference between self-harm and masochism. the only difference is in the ideas and pre-existing misconceptions others have about it. the only real 'defining' difference is in how people typically associate them. self harm is usually associated w/ someone who is trying to relive their negative feelings through physical pain, where-as masochist is someone stimulating their positive sense of self and, in this case, pleasure-feeling nerves, through physical pain. ultimately they come down to the same image, and the boundary definitely overlaps here. you've got harry, who happens to be on a self-harm kick because his masochistic needs aren't being met - it's actually not uncommon and NOT unheard of. the way you have it going is just fine. any one can fall into a bad cycle, but for masochists, they need a dominant to guide them through what is okay/pleasurable pain, and what is actually harmful pain. if they don't have this guide in their life, then just like anyone else who gets into that bad rut, they could end up doing permanent and deadly harm to themselves.
schedule January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Amazing. Good Lord you know how to write! And with truly believable dom/sub relationships - kudos! Loved it, the smut, the plot, the style, the potential, all of it! Can't wait for more, so please update soon!

HS
person BakeNeko
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. Lucious and Severus are a great duo. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person missemokitty
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg omg love this fic, i want morre
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it!! ;P
person Bee
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I absolutely LOVE this fic! It is by far the best one I've found on this site in a while. I hope the next chapter comes out soon, can't wait to read more from you (:
person Tansule
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. I sat down today and read from 1-6 and realized thats all that you had so far and was excited and sad by that. I hope to see more soon, well done!
person Jen
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully sinful! Delicious and Hot! and I can not wait for a new chapter.
person san59
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your fiction!!!!!