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for Punish Me

by Sparrowhawk

schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn good thing Severus came in when he did. Harry is definitely a lot closer to becoming Severus' real "pet" and allowing them to enter into a full D/s relationship. And aren't we the lucky ones that get to read all the juicy details of such!

~~ Meechy
person magentah
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So excited to see an update! And to see that you're (maybe a little?) feeling a bit better. I'm bipolar--the sort that results in being mostly depressed most of the time--and definitely understand the debilitating crush depression can have on a life. Take all the time you need and be gentle with yourself.

That said, the chapter! Severus coming to Harry's rescue! Eeeeeeee! Adorable hopefully-not-too-traumatized Teddy Lupin! I don't know why I'm telling you what you wrote, I'm just so excited and in love with all the things! Except for the bad guy, and not knowing who sent him (Severus-in-my-head is correcting that to "not knowing from whom he was sent"... I think I'm overtired). However, we DO know that he was hired by someone, which at least confirms the conspiracy theory. Looks like Harry's ready to admit to Severus what he wants--at least, I certainly hope he can say it if he's already calling the man Master (although given the circumstances, it'd be understandable if it was a slip; but in that case, I'm then worried about Severus and his reaction). Yay! I thoroughly enjoyed the update as well as the excuse to reread the entire story. Looking forward to the next chapter with no agenda or expectation for when it arrives. :)
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! I love this story and I am so glad that you updated it. It has everything I want in a story and now I want more. Please update soon! Great work!
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sigh I am forever enchanted with your story. I hope you are feeling better and that life is taking it easy on you. Good tidings and blessed be. -Darkness
person k.
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
yey ;) I'm really happy to see new chapter
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yeah your back! I'm sorry you were have a rough time, I hope it gets better for you and not just because I love the story ;) Hope you can update again soon!


P.S
I Love Teddy's nickname.
schedule March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh I hope you haven't abandoned this fanfic. I love it. <3 Please update soon? *puppy dog eyes*
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story! I've read it like 500 times! I Check twice a day for an update, hoping to see one soon!
schedule February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this... Please!
person Jupi
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More please