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July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I check back every day to see if this story has updated- I miss it so much!!
Can't wait for the next chapter, I've really fallen in love with this story <3
Can't wait for the next chapter, I've really fallen in love with this story <3
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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. This fic is perfect in so many ways. I personally have no pain tolerance, but I know others who want that kind of play from their Doms. I love to read about it, I just don't mix well with it personally. I will be checking back for updates. I wonder if Harry will ever be taken to a club and allowed to meet another sub. It's always relaxing to meet another active sub. It really does help to ease the mind.
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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story and thank you for answering my question! Can't :D
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Omg love it!! Awesome chapter as always! I can't wait to read the next one! :)
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thanks for another buetifuly written chapter :)
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Moooore pleeeeease! It's great!
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More spankings!
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June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have just found this story and I love the idea. I thought I would share some encouragement and one suggestion.
The master/slave dynamic very well thought out. The way Harry is finding freedom in bondage (literal and metaphorically) feels real. Also, I like to think about pain in the way this story shows it. Pain can serve as a link to the moment. It can serve to ground you in the present.
Not going to say anything about the yummy bits because I think you know they are hot and absolutely perfect.
I have one suggestion. Some of the dialog seems stiff. This story could benefit from a beta as far as the non-sexy dialog goes.
The master/slave dynamic very well thought out. The way Harry is finding freedom in bondage (literal and metaphorically) feels real. Also, I like to think about pain in the way this story shows it. Pain can serve as a link to the moment. It can serve to ground you in the present.
Not going to say anything about the yummy bits because I think you know they are hot and absolutely perfect.
I have one suggestion. Some of the dialog seems stiff. This story could benefit from a beta as far as the non-sexy dialog goes.
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June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! It's good that they are getting to know each other and not just jump right in, it's more believable- not to mention the UST is fun to watch! Poor Harry, doesn't know what to do with his new feelings. Thanks for the update! :)