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for Punish Me

by Sparrowhawk

person ichi
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi !

I started to read your story about three hours ago...and couldn't stop :). It really is an amazing story, and I hope the following chapters will be there soon !! Can't wait !!!
And I'm actually French, so if you need help with this language, I'll be glad to help ! There are a few mistakes in this chapter, let me know if you want me to correct them :)
(French is terribly difficult, everybody has trouble with it. Even the French themselves.)
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Solo excited forthe next chapter!! I hope Severus doesn't turn around
schedule August 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I am not a Snape fan by any means but I like the Snape in this story very much. He's human without losing the essence of who he was in canon. I look forward to its continuation.
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I find myself a bit jealous that Harry gets to listen to Severus speak french. :)
person Grace
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I literally love this fic. I love sev, I love Harry and lucius! Please update soon!
person wolfcathope
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story glad to have the update, I am sure Harry will keep both men on their toes.
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good Grief Harry!!! You know you want him... you can ask for punishment... ASK FOR PLEASURE TOO!
schedule August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Thanks for updating.
schedule August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loooove it! Plse update soon!
person The blind apprentice
schedule July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!
Was excited to see updates!
I lurk around here sometimes, really enjoying this. Different from other SS/ho BDSM stories, thank god!
Wanted to drop by and say hi :-)
Looking forward to further updates!
TBA