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November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story. Its so fantastically written i wish i could read more. I love you're writing style.
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November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!
First of all, thank you for the great, oh so great story !! I really like it ^^. The plot and the writing are really good. Also, I like the way you present the different characters. I hope you will continue updating regularly because I really look forward to reading the next chapters!
I also wanted to offer you my services regarding the french lines in this chapter. ( and eventually any other chapter in need of translation.)
You see, I am a french native speaker, and althought I can see you really worked hard on these translations, most of the lines are weird or really hard to understand. Or sometimes, it's fairly easy to understand but the word order is all wrong for example. In most cases, I understood what you meant by making the reverse translation doing a literal word-by-word translation.
So, if you wish me to, I would gladly translate all your lines in french. But don't worry; the fact that the translation isn't perfect doesn't alter the quality of your story in any way, I assure you, it's just a little disturbing for french native speakers I guess. I wouldn't have dared make the offer if I hadn't seen your comment at the end of the chapter. Anyway, here is my e-mail in case you are interested ; mazama_28@hotmail.com, just send me a quick note and I shall be happy to help you ^^. Thanks again for your writing, Mazama.
First of all, thank you for the great, oh so great story !! I really like it ^^. The plot and the writing are really good. Also, I like the way you present the different characters. I hope you will continue updating regularly because I really look forward to reading the next chapters!
I also wanted to offer you my services regarding the french lines in this chapter. ( and eventually any other chapter in need of translation.)
You see, I am a french native speaker, and althought I can see you really worked hard on these translations, most of the lines are weird or really hard to understand. Or sometimes, it's fairly easy to understand but the word order is all wrong for example. In most cases, I understood what you meant by making the reverse translation doing a literal word-by-word translation.
So, if you wish me to, I would gladly translate all your lines in french. But don't worry; the fact that the translation isn't perfect doesn't alter the quality of your story in any way, I assure you, it's just a little disturbing for french native speakers I guess. I wouldn't have dared make the offer if I hadn't seen your comment at the end of the chapter. Anyway, here is my e-mail in case you are interested ; mazama_28@hotmail.com, just send me a quick note and I shall be happy to help you ^^. Thanks again for your writing, Mazama.
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
Just wanted to say I enjoy this story. I don't speak French, so thank you for the translation!
Hope to see a bit more soon, perhaps?
Just wanted to say I enjoy this story. I don't speak French, so thank you for the translation!
Hope to see a bit more soon, perhaps?
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October 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
PLS NEW CHAPER .... TWO MONTHS PLEASE.... THIS STORY IS EXCELENT PLS
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September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is such a HOT story! I love your version of Severus, think I've fallen in love. So controlling, absolutely the perfect Dom. Please update as soon as you can!!:)
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August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story can you start an email list for updates or something
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August 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. but you should update it again.
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August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
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August 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
at least Ron didn't give him too much crap about the gay thing. Blushing Harry is too cute
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August 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had to wait a moment after reading chapter 11 before I could comment because it's too good. I just came across this fic and read all of it as quickly as I could. I am very impressed with your writing style, characterizations, and explanations about the D/s lifestyles (and well just everything). I'm very excited to see you write more and to see how their date goes. I'm also curious to see how Harry handles the judgement he's sure to encounter at some point.