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August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying reading your story! The plot is fun, but even better is your writing. Spell-binding! The action scenes are awesome, the sex scenes are steamy, and you can visualize almost every aspect of the story. It's fantastic! Thank you for the story and until the next chapter.
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July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
#4- a good story so far, interesting plot adn i like your take on the characters. some parts seem a little rushed, like the bit with kingsley, but otherwise the pacing seems pretty good. you do have a few grammar issues throughout or places where there could have been a better word choice, but nothing major (one little thing, when talking about just two people it's "neither", when three or more, then it's "none"). overall, good story and i look forward to seeing where you go with it
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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
#1- interesting start to things, liked harry's reaction to snape being injured. only complaint is the part where ron and harry -accio- their brooms, they were nowhere near them so assuming it work from huge distances, they'd be waiting for a while while unmanned brooms flew through whatever muggle and magical areas it took to get to them.
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May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot of this story, its new and interesting. I can't wait to read more and see how you develop each of the relationships.
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May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this fic so far, I like the plot line and the character interaction. Looking forward to future updates to see where you take it.
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May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do like this story.
It seems like an interesting build up to the plot.
I can't wait to see how they will fair living under the same roof :D
It seems like an interesting build up to the plot.
I can't wait to see how they will fair living under the same roof :D
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May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this. You must continue with whatever plot you have in mind. I wonder how all of them will survive under one roof. But I think I do see Snape and Harry getting closer as Harry will have teddy, and Ron will probably be helping Harry with Teddy and maybe that will get Draco to get closer to Ron. So I hope all works out well and will TRY to wait for an update.
Hopefully soon.
Hopefully soon.
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May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
blinks... well, that explains how they got started. *pokes them carefully with a stick.
meanwhile... else where...
meanwhile... else where...
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May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting, i can't wait to see what happens next.
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May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was hawt stuff. I bet that magic surrounding them was some sort of bonding, right? Well I hope more is to come soon and hope Snape and Harry will be alright. Hope more is to come soon please.