rate_review Reviews

Traumatic beginning, that moved into a beautiful love story. This was a job well done

You're story was really fantastic.

That is a really cute story. I love it. I hope my story that I created has some great reviews.

oh come on weve just got to know how well he goes with this preg.and what the babys name is and if it is a boy or a girl or if it's both

That was really lovely.

I really liked how this began. It set up the story and it was very intense in how it showed how the main characters would have to overcome something that was so horrible but still neither one of their fault. I liked the rest of the story too... but after Harry had the baby it all went kind of quick. I really like your writing style but I kept finding myself wanting more!!! You know... there would be a jump in time or progress in their relationship and I wanted to know about HOW it changed and read more about them living together amd changing their opinions and feelings towards each other.

So if you ever get bored and feel like adding more to a story... pick this one!!! I'd love to read more of the 'in between' action :)