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Really great start. Maybe you can give Ron a chance for some loving, after all maybe he is jealous that everyone else gets loving with Harry. Also why not turn the dorm into Harry's harem. I also like the ones where some of the Weasley older brothers get to join the fun. I hope that you like at least one of my pairings, buts its okay if you don't. I can't wait to find out your ideas in future chapters. Please update when you can find the time.

Ooh, yay, you have a creature fic too! *settling in for a nice good read*. Nice start! Please tell me that Sev's going to be one of Harry's mates? I love that and hmm, could there be a rare pairing of some sort involved? Awaiting the next chapter!

now if you were to have the creevey brothers take over the job of beaters after the weasley twins leave hogwarts then that would add even more chances for the creevey brothers to get some harry time, as in sex time with harry. an i do not see a gay harry giving up free morning blowjobs from the creevey's an since this is mpreg that would likely mean anal sex as well.

What, that it!!! Why did you stop????? There, you stopped there? You cruel evil woman you! PLEEEEEEEEESE Continue! PLEASE!!!!! Other wise it is amazing thus far, I like dominant Harry and I love Harry with serious baggage. This is amazing! Keep it up!

it's a good start...i love creature fics...can't wait 4 more.

Wow. Really good start. I can't wait for more. :) Please, update soon.

xoxo,
kitkat

you wish suggested pairings i would think harry/collin/dennis since this is starting 6th year harry would have been able to spend most if not all of 4th and 5th year having sex with them and no one would have cared, since collin and dennis have spent thier whole time at hogwarts following harry around no one would think twice about about them following him up to the dorms every night. if anyone did think about it they would mearly think the two are hoping to catch harry in the shower so they can get a picture to wank off to. an how you could start this is to have most of the house go home during christmas holiday right after the yule ball, have harry be in a bit of a bad mode and the creevey brothers offer to do ANYTHING to cheer him up.

personally i think harry having anything to do with ron weasley by this point in his life would be stupid. every time harry turns around ron is either mad at harry for having money and or fame. no normal or even semi-normal person would put up with an asshole like ron. how many friends has ron cost harry over the years with his ideas about slytherins being evil, ravenclaws as bookworm know-it-all and hufflepuffs as just not worth bothering with. he is the poor mans draco malfoy if ron had money they would be twins other then the whole muggle muggleborn idea, of course in rons case it is slytherins not muggles that are worthless.

as far as ron and granger getting hooked up it is totally stupid unless it is grangers idea as a way to get a better job in the ministry of magic do to being married to a sumwhat proper wizarding family because i think ron would end up with a stay at home mom type just like his mother and granger would end up with someone as smart as herself. an i do like the fact harry seems to be the boss instead of the bitch in this story unlike so many others.