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Awesome! Though you really need to get a beta. Anyway, thank you for the story, bye!

Rhaaa it is too short! I want 30 pages for the next chapter... it isn't possible? oh, pity );
I want to read the next chapter, Rabastan is really dead? maybe it was the avada kedavra, maybe he is still alive :)

i'm glad this is continuing and that spelling and grammar have been fixed up a lot... now we just need to move on to using the right word. where you had completed and consumed, did you mean consummated? i know it's troublesome checking a whole chapter and its so much easier just to let spell check do it and hope but it irks the hell out of me when people do that.
it's something that needs working on.

anywho, i think har understands where v is coming from a bit now. i look forward to when siri and roddie sort em selves out. he's far to good for bella anyway.

bugger, dose that mean Rab's dead. har will be devastated.

another mis used word. though in this case, it just needed to be turned to a plural, e.g. widen to widened.

well, if he wants his har to stay, then V better answer right. cause you know, if V doesn't har is going to disappear again until the baby is born at least. I'm glad siri is back in the picture and from the look of things he's not going to be single for much longer. ^.^
how dramatic do you want the next chappie to be. gringots wouldn't allow a confrontation within their bank i don't think, but outside afterwoulds? oh yes, that's a prime candidate for an explosion of some sort. not sure if the Order would be it though. i mean, the goblins tend to mind their own business so they wouldn't go sending for aurors or anything like that.

Maybe you could have Bella killed and let Sirius & Rodolphus be together? Please update chapter ten soon.

Thank you for writing Voldemort/Harry. Too few make the attempt and fewer pull it off. I love the shiny new chapter :D I'll be looking forward to the next installment!

nice to know har is having an effect and YAY he's back with siri. *beams.
Really, seriously, why the HELL isn't Bella dead yet?! She's an active threat to the Lord's mate after all.
Well, anyway, har should be safe a Grimmald for a bit. Siri and Kreacher will take good care of him until the pregnancy can't be voided. nice way of buying time for him. neatly done.

I really liked it :) I usually welcome any HP/LV fics with great caution, as they mostly turn out to be a complete writing disaster, but... yours is not so bad, no bad at all :) You have my interest, definitely.

A pity Harry was forced to flee Voldemort because of Bellatrix - I hope she will be properly punished for her behaviour. And that Tom will know of Harry's pregnancy soon ;)

Hmm, poor Harry, can't wait to see how Voldy is going to react when he finds out Harry's pregnant. Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^

Thanks so much for updating! Your story is so very lovely. I'll be on the look out for the next chapter. Until then!