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Damn you, madame, you are corrupting me. This was such and unusual setup, it took me a while to puzzle it all out, you kept it going well and something completely different from everything else I read recently. Plus, hot. You have a way with words.

It's not often that a story brings me to frank tears, even if it tears at and warms my heart, but I am crying as I write this. Such a quiet, subtle story... and such intense love. This is utterly beautiful, and I will never forget it. Thank you for writing it and sharing it.

I very much enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing. I'm still a bit confused about how the polyjuice potion was used though. Did both both use it to harvest what was needed from the other?

Thank you for sharing this story with us. I really enjoyed reading it. I usually don't like reading stories with changing points of view, but you've done a really good job here. There is just one little thing you might consider changing, you're using the term "medi-witch" for Harry, as he is male "medi-wizard" would be more appropriate. But other than that, well done.