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by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know what to really expect of this, but it's dark and I love dark, so I gave it a go, and now I really want more! It's really good. The Draco/Harry dynamic is really interesting.
schedule May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
there!?! you stopped there!?? Arrrgggg!!!!!!!!!
person LittleO
schedule May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic as usual. Please keep up the good work! Thank you.
person Talltree-san
schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And the breaking point begins. It makes me wonder when Harry drove Chance out whether she alerted the other healers what happened or not. If she did...would they try and stop Harry from possibly leaving the hospital, now deeming him too dangerous to let loose into the world. Would they be insane enough to even try keeping him against his will O_O!
person SP777
schedule May 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM

Actually I did mean 'squirmish' as in do the thought of writing scenes with
snakes make you...squirm, as opposed to be being squeamish about it. Yeah, I'm
making up my own s***, just go with it. :-)
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about #4..

I don't know what to say about this chapter except is this where Harry stands
at the crossroads?
schedule May 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
soooooo interesting!!! This story is such a twisty turny odd kind of story... I totally love it. Harry is on the edge of thinking himself crazy and Draco is all science-y and wanting to save knowledge while still having it out for Potter and maybe revenge? Very much looking forward to more.
person Talltree-san
schedule May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well at least Harry is thinking over what Draco said. I mean his body is trying to turn on him for pete's sake! But his consideration over turning to the Dark side of wizard things is probably gonna be bad for Harry's relationship with Ron, and Hermione though :/.
person dust in the wind
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. Looking forward to Harry's breaking point.
person SP777
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #3....

1. I don't know about anyone else, but I'm all for Harry becoming a dark
wizard.

2. I'm surprised you're even doing this story. Do you ever get a little...I
don't know...squirmish [for lack of a better word].
person LittleO
schedule May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not to be a bubbling fangirl but I love your stuff.

This is in a different vein and I'm terribly excited to see how it goes! How often do you plan on updating?

As for the story, I think one of my highest fears isn't something tangible - it's insubstantial but all-encompassing, inescapable madness. To be disregarded, forgotten, put out of sight, unable to have input or say in your surroundings - maybe not everyone feels this way. But I feel it is always better to act, to be doing, then waiting. I can see how this would be great impetus to Harry, who has always acted, to move towards the Dark when he loses control as the only way to act. I really enjoy this premise. Happy writing! I can't wait to read what is next.