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June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, the eyes changing and venom are incredibly cool. I am seriously enjoying this story. I don't think I've ever seen quite this take on Dark Magic being accepted before. I like it a lot.
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June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can see how it would have hurt Harry to have to fight Ron. With Hermione it was just restraining her but fighting Ron could have permanently damaged their friendship. And he always has been fearful over certain things.
lol poor Harry had no clue all the plans Draco had for him!
lol poor Harry had no clue all the plans Draco had for him!
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June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this on fanfiction.net. Very intereting plot! It'll take some time with Ron though, because he's too thick-headed will always in a way be jealous of what Harry has and is. Looking forward to the next update :)
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June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #7...
Wow...I know I've wanted to see you do a story that focuses on
Harry's abilities as a Parselmouth, but you took it to a different
level, didn't ya??? O_O
Well, as long as we don't see Harry slithering on the ground & spitting! Right? :-D
Hahaha!
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Uhh..right?? O_o
Wow...I know I've wanted to see you do a story that focuses on
Harry's abilities as a Parselmouth, but you took it to a different
level, didn't ya??? O_O
Well, as long as we don't see Harry slithering on the ground & spitting! Right? :-D
Hahaha!
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Uhh..right?? O_o
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June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think the snakes could die either. At least Draco made up for it with the pilfered cobra :). Also is Harry turning into a snake anyway I mean...the teeth, changing jaw bone,slit shape pupils, and last but definetly not least the venom sacs lol (love the venom sacs!).
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ron...I'm so ashamed of you :(. That comment of Ron's about Harry potentially being a dangerous killer would have have hurt me like nothing else if I was Harry. Serves Ron right to loose the cobra to Draco...he's gonna get his ass seriously chewed out for loosing it to the enemy XO!
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was really over joyed to see an update for this. I'm really sucked in. The concept of Harry legitimately turning into a snake is unique. I really hope to see more in the future. I look forward to it.
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was a really cool escape from the hospital! I didn't know why Harry agreed to let Draco fight Ron but I found that whole battle really interesting. Draco using risky spells and taking hits on purpose to help himself out in the long run was a very smart way to fight especially since he couldn't underestimate Ron.
Harry's battle was also fun to read. I like that Draco was impressed and then Harry got embarrassed by Draco's praise lol... I like how you can put Harry's strength and vulneralibity in the same scene. Very well done :)
Harry's battle was also fun to read. I like that Draco was impressed and then Harry got embarrassed by Draco's praise lol... I like how you can put Harry's strength and vulneralibity in the same scene. Very well done :)
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, if it were me on one of the paths I would have veered off of it right away if I didn't know that doing just that was a definate no no. That Hanging Tree would have been pretty unnerving to me, wonder if the corpses are symbolic for souls. Don't know what the spitting heart would represent, or does it mean what Harry said "Give your whole heart or none at all." something along those lines or others.
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #5...
Does Draco have a concrete plan of how he's going to use Harry other than
what we, the readers, THINK he may be planning?
Does Draco have a concrete plan of how he's going to use Harry other than
what we, the readers, THINK he may be planning?