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about #14...

So, what would the 'Dark Path' be described as..?
A path between dimensions?

I love your story I want sure at first but yes now I can't wait for the next chapter!

about #13...

1. Sooo, is Harry like a Black Mamba or you're just throwing that
out there to confuzzle the masses? O_o

2. Daayyuum! This chapter stepped up to the plate...and made folks
raise an eyebrow or two. That was different. :-)

3. I swear if you make Harry bald-headed, give him red eyes...you might as
well call him Voldemort Jr. I was under the impression that Harry was going
to get his powers under control and be able to stop the effects on his body.

4. Was this story a challenge given by someone?

OMG I totally freaked out when Ashburg's spell hit lil'Whitey! And REALLY worried for the poor bastard's life when Harry gets a hold of him for that little stunt. Good thing Draco was there to curb some of that deadly fury and snakes. Also let loose a sigh of relief that Whitey was AOK...a little shookined up but fine none the less. Lastly I just had this thought is the snake called a Runespoor gonna make an appearance in the story or not? I thought it was a very interesting snake in the Harry Potter world, the basilisk snake was pretty cool too :).

Your story is BRILLIANT! I'm so excited that I keep typing the wrong keys and I'm hitting the backspace key twice as many times as I'm hitting actual letters. This has been, by far, the most thrilling story I've read in years. I cannot convey my enthusiasm appropriately through words; I have no natural talent for writing as you clearly do. I will lick the dust off your boots if it means another chapter comes soon. Much affection and anticipation until then!

You know when I think of Harry with Draco and Pansy...I think of them as the opposite of Ron and Mione. It's more like the DARK trio of the wizarding world, that sounds like a good title for a story just "The Dark Trio" and not the rest of it. I think for right now Draco and Pansy are the right kind of folk for Harry to be around. Obviously there not wiggin out over the snake features like Ron and Mione are at the moment, and Draco is practically worshipping at Harry's feet in total rapture XD!

I loved both Pansy and Draco's reactions to Harry's confession about his hidden slytherin ways. Can't wait for the next step of Draco's grand plan.

Oowee, that ending packed quite a potent punch! And Weasley just seems more trouble than he's worth, what Hermione sees in him is beyond me :(!

Whooo I Loved this.

Will Pansy be making more of an apperance from now on? And some other dark wizards too? Not that I would mind never seeing anyone but Harry and Draco again hehe. Cant wait to see Harry's reaction to that kiss!

Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the entertainment.

about #11...

First of all, how are you...I really get to bother you much like
I usually do to ask [via email]

Second, it just occured to me that this IS a creature fic, I'm so
used to you doing just the basic Harry/Draco story, regardless of the
situation, that this is the first time I've seen you do an actual
creature fiction...and no VS stories are not the same to me.