rate_review Reviews

I really liked chapter 20. You showed the real depth of Draco's feelings toward Harry... not just as a source of information or an ally... allie... (heck I haven't slept and can't spell)... as a PARTNER! You showed clearly Draco's developing feelings for Harry himself and they are the feelings that Harry has always wanted someone to feel for him as well as someone he can trust and depend on in return. Really really well done.

Draco and Harry's relationship is evolving quite beautifully. it's such a nice an even flow they got there :). I also didn't know that Ron and Mione were taken by the Ministries, I guess in their minds there guilty by association to Harry by being his friends. Probably thinks he's relaying information to them.

about #19..

Is Pansy's fear of a shapeshifting Harry a bit irrational
or is there a reason?

By the way, I may not review much, but I am still reading.

Ugh just sick of Pansy and her aversions to Harry's snake features DX! But as Harry said he doesn't have to like her and neither do I. And how would Lil' Whitey know about human mating if he was just a figment product of Harry's Dark path anyway to think it uninteresting XD lol!

LOL. I am indeed enjoying everything about this chapter, not just the planning.

I think this is one of my favourites of yours so far (not only because it isnt complete yet)

I cant wait to see what Millicents "distraction" is, and hope that Harry wont lose too many more of his little pets, he really doesnt like that. Though I guess if something bad happened they would rise up and use their lives to protect him. Maybe from a wall of fire or something like that hehe. Poor little snakes.

I also cant decide whether I think Malfoy a bit wierd for this fettish he so obviously has, or just within the normal boundaries of the story. Of course anything goes with imagination and fanfic, so I have no complaints at all :D

I shall indeed do that, I have an LJ (not that I use it often)

That chapter was very interesting, I liked that Harry can unlock his own dark paths. That should be an interesting development for later on. Also Actinic light was an awesome way to describe that! It was such a cool scene.

Thank you again

Maybe thats why Ron and Mione haven't contacted Harry in several days now because the Ministry is hounding them. I probably would have done the same thing, if it meant less trouble for both sides. And by both sides I mean me for one and the other being my close friend. Unless said friend killed someone then all bets are off!

about #17...

Alright now, your Harry thinks too much. He should
have said '..to hell with it', then went ahead and pound to
his heart's content! :-)

...and Draco would have loved him for it.

Next time I say go for it with the next sex scene, your readers will
love you for it.

I like that Harry realizes that this was something more... that Draco had wanted him for a long time. I think Draco deserves for Harry to know that.

Oh yes knew Draco was gonna put that forked tongue to work ;3! While Harry struts those fancy snake works and the like. So good that Harry is comfortable enough to be intimate with Draco like this scales and all.