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by Lomonaaeren

person Kristin
schedule December 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The term "dumb and blind" is actually both offensive and wrong. It is equating deafness to being dumb. Unless you are making to show Harry's lack of understanding about being deaf, the term has no purpose.
person Zakaira
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderfully crafted story. I loved all the magic and adventure.
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it's over! It was a wild ride, and a beautiful ending that had me tearing up. Thanks for enriching the Harry/Draco fan fiction vault with you spectacular story!
schedule September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The End huh? That seemed a little cut. But it was a cute ending never the less, with the main aim of what they were doing done, and them being on their way to getting all the Dark Arts and the rest the way they want it.

I liked the new snake, pity we wont see more of him now. Memory is a brilliant name :D

I enjoyed this story very much, thank you for writing it. And if you decide to do a sequel at some point when youve more time. I shall be very glad.
person lisa
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what that was the end? of the whole story?? i feel like you've cut it off right after the 1st act! there is so much more you could go with this! why did you decide to end right there? :/
person SParker
schedule September 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about the end...

O_o ....never would I have thought you would pick a
name like that. Regardless, this was a VERY interesting story.

One would say it completely came out of left field, but hey...I
say fanfiction should always be interesting. :-)
person SParker
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #25...

1. ...and just HOW does a snake do a happy dance? :-)

2. Hmm..names for a snake? Shika Syther Thanatos [god of nonviolent death]
Asmodeus

3. I must admit your fight scenes get better & better to the point that you
explain complex manuveurs well. Now if only you can do that with Quidditch.
:-)

4. Everytime I think of Harry, I can't help but see him as a snake in my head.
It's easy to compare him to Voldemort, but in reality I would compare him to Nagini.
Becuase if you think about it, Harry is no longer 'human'. O_o
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if they will meet anything else before they get out of there, or if they will just rip open a dark path and vanish. It will be interesting to see what happens. I would giggle if they came across an unconcious Pansy back there and wonder what had happened to her. Or if all the keys blew up!

Anyway enough with my speculation. I like that Hermione at least might be seeing a new side to Harry. Poor guy has been misunderstood enough by now :)
person Talltree-san
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I kinda laughed at the line of Hermione probably being the most dangerous between her and Ron. I think that is correct too, Ron can be to bull-headed or hot-headed and just charge ahead without thinking anything through first.
person polka dot
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dont want to picture Harry snake like, but the action scenes in this are good.