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for Firework

by KusanoSaku

schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you this story is one of my favorite's it is so good and captivating that I can't help but enjoy the ride. I like how all the main players are interacting and I can't wait to see what happens with Sirius.
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I sooo can't wait for more!
person delia cerrano
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so intricate...all the who is who & what happened when! But I do love the relationships (which are also intricate)
so I guess who comes from whom is important. I guess you have to take it all in. I feel sooo bad for Lucius and Severus!
I don't wish bad for Narcissa because she certainly had a bad deal for her love life buttt please get out of Lucius & Severus' way! Draco & Harry? Ooo La La. Ron? Where is a dementor when you need one! Seriously I bet we find out that Dumbledore did something to his mind making his own bad thoughts worse.
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, that old bastard screwed everyone over didn't he. He has serious karma owing and will thoroughly enjoy when it catches him in the neck.
i hope someone will explain to har what he just swore. I'm sure he'll do his best to up hold it.
It doesn't surprise me that Lil's knew. After all, she was a very intelligent lady... and she hung out with a bunch of pranksters. If there was a way around thing she would have found it.
What's this about har having a sister?
person Jan
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 16 soon.
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy smoke! Oh Dumbles!!! You messed up big time!!! Lily knew? Wow!
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was an action packed chapter and I can't wait for Dumbledore to get his a@# handed to him...
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please update chapter 15 soon ^_^
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lots of blah blah and typically Malfoy ian plotting but at least they're plotting on har's behalf this time out and hopefully they can bypass dear dumbles and get har free of his grasp and Dursley drear for keeps.

Dumbles really needs to go. Has he forgotten about the horcruxs? sure they might have V under wraps for now, but witht he Horcrux out there, theres no guaranty they'll keep him. Gah, he's slime. ready to just junk har now that he doesn't need him.

Is the prophesy still in play?
person dinkadot
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOW, the passion in this story just flows out the words!! Very moving and emotional I am really really looking forward to the next update on this story as well as others of yours.
Brandi