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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First, you rate Outstanding, as in all your works here! Poor Harry. I'd like to see Ron drawn and quartered! Dumbles too! Keep up the good work!!
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to see blood! He will party for this right?
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October 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow! What a rampage...and permanent scaring? Can't there be some ancient charm or something that would fix Harrys' eye and Harrys, Draco & Hermiones scars? I really think Dumbledore has something to do with Rons' behavior.
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ireally love this story but poor Harry now scared....Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just finished Chapter 17. Outstanding!
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just got caught back up with this. all ican say is yikes!! you certainly aren't letting harry off easy in this story are you? poor boy just keeps getting more and more wailed on, at least he's got people around to love and support him. only goof i found in this last chapter is with the two ingredients, you forgot to include a name or mention them when poppy was giving her recap to kingsly, it said something like "it was covered in - which left..." personally i'd just make up a couple things, pick a random animal and body part lol. keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
idiots. dumbles might not care about har anymore but you can bet the rest of the WW will. There's going to be hell to pay and there's a very good chance har won't WANT to go back to hogwarts. not after this.
is ron in his right mind. i know he's jealous but to do something like this is just plain stupid.
is ron in his right mind. i know he's jealous but to do something like this is just plain stupid.
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September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Woow i love thous far and cant wait for more update soon k?
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September 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding! Please update chapter 17 soon ^_^
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September 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting. a short one this time out.
I think ande is a good choice too. i look forward to the time when dumbles and fudge both go.
Poor har, he almost, almost had a sibling.
I think ande is a good choice too. i look forward to the time when dumbles and fudge both go.
Poor har, he almost, almost had a sibling.