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for Firework

by KusanoSaku

schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
har must have had a hella good natural glamour to hide all that from poppy. either that or poppy just didn't care.
i can see draco being very important in har's future. har's never had anyone to love him utterly before and draco will never let him near the dursleys again. in fact, i'd be very surprised if something unfortunate doesn't happen to dumbles and the dursleys both.
draco will be good for him. help him restore is zeroic confidence. it's so much easier to have self confidence when there's someone outside willing to show you that they love and think you are beautiful.
person jujukitty
schedule November 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
and the lightbulb clicked on for draco finally lol. and so much awww, draco's so sweet and good to harry. you did a wonderful job with the whole talk and everything. keep up the good work :)
person delia cerrano
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very romantic with Draco reassuring Harry that he was still beautiful in Dracos' eye. He was so thoughtful reminding Harry all he had gone through & still won out. It made my heart hurt & brought real tears to read what he had gone through in his young life. How can anyone be that cruel!!! (even if this was in a story you still read about similiar in the news every once in awhile).
person Helen
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When will the nextart be u?
person sablerose2
schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story and can't wait for the next update!!
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Once again, another outstanding chapter! Thanks for your hard work!
schedule October 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The story so far is great! Poor Harry! Still getting hurt after everything that has happened to him... Please update soon. I love your story. If you would like to keep in touch, please email me @ kat.baby.fun@gmail.com.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fine chapter. Got things set up to move everyone out to Malfoy Manor. Now let's have some interaction again please.
Pushy, agressive, greedy probably...but I am a faithful, loyal & appreciative reader also.
person jujukitty
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i've honestly read ones that were even worse to poor harry, but hopefully after all his suffering will come all the good stuff he's been missing, and he is surrounded by people that love him whether he's willing to admit to it yet or not. keep up the good work :)
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
if ronnikins is in his right head, he's just screwed himself over viciously. ain't nobody going to care about a jealous bit player like himself... except that he injured the 'savior' and attacked two other students. That's not something i'd want to be remembered for. Considering how good at strategy you have to be to play chess, ron certainly isn't thinking worth a lick and now that his family is about to boot him, dumbles will probably drop him like a hot rock. He has no future to speak of. I'd keep track of him anyway though. he might well end up with the strength of desperation.
I wonder if mio will switch schools too.
I still say dumbles is being very short sighted. having influence over the BWL means power and when he junked har, he junked that too.
Har will have a lot of healing to do. I hope Remi, luc, sev and draco are up to it. even mio might start getting back in touch.