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January 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I fell in love with this story!!!! Honestly I can not find fault in it ato all. You are a wonderfully creative writer and I look forward to the update
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December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
what in the blazes is wrong with Dumbles??? is he senile?? or completely mad? they should get Harry and Draco out of there... as well as Hermione! btw,great chapter!!
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December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that was very hot! excellent chapter. thank you for you and thank you for the sharing of yourself with others.
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December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! it's about time Ronald got what he deserved. and as to Harry and Draco, Harry made the right move when he listened to Andromeda. I feel that Draco and Harry have to
overcome some of Harry's trauma. especially about the tub. all in all I loved the chapter and I would like to read more of this story. please do not abandon it.
overcome some of Harry's trauma. especially about the tub. all in all I loved the chapter and I would like to read more of this story. please do not abandon it.
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December 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad Ron got what he deserves ^_^ though it would suck if what Lucius suspect about his cousin and Albus is true! please update chapter 25 soon.
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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7
This is an interesting story. I remember reading some of it a while ago, but for some reason it fell off my radar until now. I don't care for the way Ron seems to be heading in this, but Insanely Jealous Ron is almost a cliche so I'm resigned to it. :-) I only hope Hermione reacts better.
This is one error you make consistently, which is using "then" instead of "than."
"Harry closed his eyes, hating himself because he wanted more then that." More THAN that.
"'Of course you didn't mean to. Anymore then I meant to blow out all the windows in the North Wing of the Manor.' Draco said softly. . . ." Any more THAN I meant to.
THAN is used for making comparisons. Use "then" when referring to time: Harry smiled first, and then he laughed out loud.
This is an interesting story. I remember reading some of it a while ago, but for some reason it fell off my radar until now. I don't care for the way Ron seems to be heading in this, but Insanely Jealous Ron is almost a cliche so I'm resigned to it. :-) I only hope Hermione reacts better.
This is one error you make consistently, which is using "then" instead of "than."
"Harry closed his eyes, hating himself because he wanted more then that." More THAN that.
"'Of course you didn't mean to. Anymore then I meant to blow out all the windows in the North Wing of the Manor.' Draco said softly. . . ." Any more THAN I meant to.
THAN is used for making comparisons. Use "then" when referring to time: Harry smiled first, and then he laughed out loud.
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December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9
Wow. That was quite an outburst from Severus, in a very public place too. Seems very out of character for him and actually kind of inappropriate, given that Harry was being transported to the Infirmary. Can't really see Madame Pomfrey just standing there and allowing first Draco and then Snape to delay her patient getting treatment.
Wow. That was quite an outburst from Severus, in a very public place too. Seems very out of character for him and actually kind of inappropriate, given that Harry was being transported to the Infirmary. Can't really see Madame Pomfrey just standing there and allowing first Draco and then Snape to delay her patient getting treatment.
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November 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i love this fanfic !!
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September 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG your writing is awesome !!!!! I'm so hooked on the story please please update this don't leave it it's so good !!!!!!!!!
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February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and hope you are able to move Harry into a more positive future