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by KusanoSaku

schedule December 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 very emotionally difficult to read about the abuse that all of them went through. Btw, what’s happening with Harry getting a new eye or Severus working on creating a potion that will heal the various parts? Perhaps he finds a physiology book or something in a really old potions journal, or a dark arts book that was more on healing from scars using something from before the injury occurred? I always thought it would be really cool to use something from before the attack, like saliva, blood, urine, skin together with  a super strong or multitude of nutrition potions to supply the missing elements needed together with a runic/blood ritual that could do a cellular exchange based on the stronger, healthier cellular memory. 

 

I always thought that that if they could prove whatever Dumbledore did to Tom Riddle that caused him to fear death so much that he split his soul to continue living if the bombs dropped on him in London during the summer, if that was an alternative way to bring Tom Riddle back and regain his sanity and life, it would probably put him at the age where he split his soul and changed his personality completely.  (Horrible run on sentence! Lol) 

Tom was choosing the only ritual he could find using father, servant and enemy, but what if he could return using a part of him from when he was younger? The Unspeakables have been ‘examining and questioning Tom since Lucius and Severus caught them in the graveyard. What have they discovered? What horrors lie in Tom’s past that Dumbledore allowed? If Tom resembled someone other that the dark hair, could you really not see Dumbledore abusing him using hair colour changing. Something caused Tom to snap. If that was the age Dumbledore was attracted to, it could sure explain it. 

person Anon
schedule November 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why are all of your stories WIPs? It's annoying. I kind of want to read them, but hate when they are not done, especially yours because you have soon many that are so old. Why can't you just finish one then move on to the next one?
person starr
schedule October 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
nice and can't wait to see Dubbledork get what is coming to him , better be a good one !!!!!!!! thanks for the update
person Jess
schedule October 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your story has potential. However, it was difficult to read in places due to the typos and bad grammar. It needs to be edited--quite badly. I strongly suggest you read a portion of it slowly and aloud. You'll be surprised. :)
person starr
schedule September 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update and hope soon they catch Dubbles !!!!! happy to see that Harry is getting better !!!!!
person Purple Mist
schedule June 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Now I remember why I hadn't favored this story; you hurt Harry above and beyond what I can stand reading inside a fanfic. Pity, because reading this I was enjoying myself and asking myself why I hadn't favored your story. And now I remember. Few stories made me cry with the abuse Harry goes through, but to have Ron cut up his face and blind him... Sorry, you really can write well and grab ahold of a readers' attention, but I'm done here. I was enjoying this so much, but now I'm just disappointed.
schedule April 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I can't tell if it is completed or not, but it didn't say wip on the description, so I am assuming it is. It was good.I just wish it had more closure at the end is all.
person Christina G.
schedule March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
glad to see an update. Dumbledore could have quite easily assaulted Xeno at anytime during his Hogwart's schooling. how often was Harry himself alone with the Headmaster in his office? at least twice for every year till the end of his Sixth. there should atleast have been some law about children have a parent or guardian to oversee any disaplinary talk a student may need with the HM. and with all the potions and spells to alter memories a person with that level of power could easily abuse it. and Albus had abused his office's power plenty during Harry's life. both at Hogwarts and outside. and with all his sychophants believing he shoots rainbows out his bum... it's so very easy to believe AD did something henious to Xeno. it's the same dang thing that's been going on with community religious leaders taking advantage of youths left in their trusted care. and i hope he gets prosecuted to the fullest extent of magical law.
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really liked Hermione's open and honest letter to Harry.
person starr
schedule March 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
nice that your back, it's been a bit....need to see Dubbles there be kissed and also that Molly thing !!!!!!!! thanks for the update !!!!!!