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for Nothing Sensual About It

by ShilohDarke

person Surfmistress
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lovely as a one-shot, but I wouldn't complain at all if your muse took a liking to this and inspired more ;)
person Sailor Sol
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brava! As always, darling, you take my breath away! VERY well done!!!
person Mitsu
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Holy Moly. That was....absolutely beautiful. Please tell me there's more? On one hand I want to say it cuts off too abruptly and on the other hand I want to say that it ends perfectly. ><
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another snippet??Please? Maybe you could do how it all came out? I would love to see if they stay together and whatnot... =)

This is an amazing atory! I was so caught up in the story, I could actually hear music for the tango in my mind!
person Avivafae
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was one Hell of a story! I wish there was someone to save it, archive it, and read it again!
person Chester
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I will hate you for life if you do not continue this - also part of me wants Ron to be taken down a few pegs by Hermione.
person marks pet
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more...please (pleading eyes to the author)!!!!

This story is just too HOT to be a oneshot. I have never heard a dance discribed so eroticly. I hope to read more about this steamy romance. I agree with Draco..."its about time".

However, if you decide to leave this a oneshot, I will understand and ready anything else that you have to offer.
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Oh you should absolutely continue this. I want to see her happy and fulfilled, and see Ron get his comeuppance! What a jerk!!! Thank you; that was fun! HG4eva
person Dawn
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story! Yes, I would like to see you continue this.
person SnapesBoo
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it! More please, pretty please (note big pleading puppy dog eyes).