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July 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! I love Lucius and Hermione together sooo much!
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March 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!!!!!
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January 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's great to read your fanfictions again, I'm sorry we lost touch so many years ago. I read the PDF copy of your book you had sent me but by the time I had finished it I had lost your contact info :( I hope you are well :)
SnapesOnlyOne AFF
Dark Mermaid ff.net
SnapesOnlyOne AFF
Dark Mermaid ff.net
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December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Shiloh ... I loved the three chapters here. If your muse ever decides to nibble again, I wouldn't mind reading more of it too. Of course, it could also end the way it is too. I love your stories, and I love LM/HG stories. Yours are always well written and a delight to read and reread. I have many of them saved on my hard drive too just to be sure never to lose your wonderful work.
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July 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. I like this take on the L/H relationship. I really wanted to beat Ron to a pulp though.. I hope to see more soon!
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December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story - hope that you will continue it - Also give Harry and Ron their due (pretty please!)
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September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I came across this story tonight looking for a Lucius and hermione story. And I already loved this story after only 3 chapters and I can't wait for more chapters to come. I hope you update soon:)
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September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow....
*to myself* QUIT GETTING BORED AND CURIOUS AND END UP FINDING MORE CRACK COUPLES YOU ADORE, ESP. in HARRY POTTER!! *done with half serious/ half silly rant*
I don't remember when I stumbled on this. I think I was actually looking for a SS/HG Tango fic, but I wasn't having much luck. (Not having much luck finding that theme with a lot of my favorite couples. Need to change that.) However, I am more than content to have read this one out of curiosity. I love how you have evolved Hermione and Lucius, especially Lucius. Sizzling tango description and conversation there! I read the dance chapter thrice before moving on. That's how much of a Latino dance connoisseur I am. I really liked how you understated it, letting little moments carry the dance as a whole. The ending of the chapter, combining his proposal to heal her for one night following up with a biting remark to Ron fit rather nicely too.
I read the second chapter twice the first time I found the story and a third time slower when you updated your story with a third chapter. I didn't think it was possible but I am more entranced by the vulnerable garden scene than the touching, soul-felt dance. The hummingbird element was so amazing, ethereal, in the Malfoy house, erasing the dark back tones with noble heartache, heartache echoed and rebounded twice-fold in Hermione's pain. When Hermione came undone, it was almost poetic, and when he carried her into the house after the violent outburst, with reverence and tender care, I fell for the couple emerging.
I was most worried when I saw that it wasn't finished since it seems that I find a lot more stories unfinished on this site than on ff.net.
I'm very glad that you came back to it. : )
The third chapter continued to play with any expectations I might have had, but it did not disappoint. The gentle humor with Eliza was a fun portrayal of change in the Malfoy house, a complete difference from Dobby the house elf, and with the last two chapters, it was very believable. Especially if the beautiful second chapter hadn't been written first, I don't think I would have taken that contrast as well. My respect for Lucius moved to a new level when he tended Hermione's burn on her leg. Another heart-warming moment. Then, that moment turned into something even deeper at Hermione's pain blending with Lucius' honor and love.
You've portrayed Lucius as a man with a strict code of honor and deep passion/love; Hermione, whose heart is still broken but warming to his affection surely, because hope has not been as broken and scattered as she would have believed. I really love how you bring out Lucius' rougher/darker side in his protectivness and possessiveness, and then, you contrast it with a desperate ache and innocence in Hermione's response. Really wonderful work.
Please continue writing this, and it would be lovely to see Draco talk to either one as this develops.
*to myself* QUIT GETTING BORED AND CURIOUS AND END UP FINDING MORE CRACK COUPLES YOU ADORE, ESP. in HARRY POTTER!! *done with half serious/ half silly rant*
I don't remember when I stumbled on this. I think I was actually looking for a SS/HG Tango fic, but I wasn't having much luck. (Not having much luck finding that theme with a lot of my favorite couples. Need to change that.) However, I am more than content to have read this one out of curiosity. I love how you have evolved Hermione and Lucius, especially Lucius. Sizzling tango description and conversation there! I read the dance chapter thrice before moving on. That's how much of a Latino dance connoisseur I am. I really liked how you understated it, letting little moments carry the dance as a whole. The ending of the chapter, combining his proposal to heal her for one night following up with a biting remark to Ron fit rather nicely too.
I read the second chapter twice the first time I found the story and a third time slower when you updated your story with a third chapter. I didn't think it was possible but I am more entranced by the vulnerable garden scene than the touching, soul-felt dance. The hummingbird element was so amazing, ethereal, in the Malfoy house, erasing the dark back tones with noble heartache, heartache echoed and rebounded twice-fold in Hermione's pain. When Hermione came undone, it was almost poetic, and when he carried her into the house after the violent outburst, with reverence and tender care, I fell for the couple emerging.
I was most worried when I saw that it wasn't finished since it seems that I find a lot more stories unfinished on this site than on ff.net.
I'm very glad that you came back to it. : )
The third chapter continued to play with any expectations I might have had, but it did not disappoint. The gentle humor with Eliza was a fun portrayal of change in the Malfoy house, a complete difference from Dobby the house elf, and with the last two chapters, it was very believable. Especially if the beautiful second chapter hadn't been written first, I don't think I would have taken that contrast as well. My respect for Lucius moved to a new level when he tended Hermione's burn on her leg. Another heart-warming moment. Then, that moment turned into something even deeper at Hermione's pain blending with Lucius' honor and love.
You've portrayed Lucius as a man with a strict code of honor and deep passion/love; Hermione, whose heart is still broken but warming to his affection surely, because hope has not been as broken and scattered as she would have believed. I really love how you bring out Lucius' rougher/darker side in his protectivness and possessiveness, and then, you contrast it with a desperate ache and innocence in Hermione's response. Really wonderful work.
Please continue writing this, and it would be lovely to see Draco talk to either one as this develops.
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September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was delightful even if a bit rushed. The only thing better would have been Ron knowing Hermione found the real deal with Lucius.
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved that update! I am sorry you had trouble with it, but Lucius' confession of not wanted to be alone again was perfect! Thank you, HG4eva