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by MariaTeresaQuintanar

schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Up and Close and Personal. Michelle Pfieffer
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story, hate the cliffie, I want to see Severus get some Hermione loving. The movie is Drop Dead Gorgeous, the line was said by Kirsten Dunst.
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Love the movie trivia at the end. That last movie line was from Drop Dead Gorges said by "Amber Atkins" (duh) who was played by Kirsten Dunst, after being made an anchor (like her hero Barbra Walters) because she kept a "cool head" and reported what was happening after the origonal reporter was shot by Kirstie Alleys character during a shoot out. I hope thats right!!!
person cherripepsiisgod
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is Severus nuts.....giving a woman an open invitatio for any kind of sex. Back in the day i had guys say the same exact thing.....poor bastards left with the mentality of its always the quiet ones! I dont doubt that this is going to be a very intresting next chapter......and for the sakes of lucy and draco it should be done muggle style.. no silencing charm just pillows blankets knuckles and flesh to keep the screams at bay!
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I love this... Can't way for next chapter to see where this goes.
Keep up the great job and hope to read a new chapter soon
person Dawn
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter... And now we're getting somewhere! *waggles eyebrows suggestively* Can't wait for more!

As for Amber Atkins, she's the plucky tap-dancing protagonist of one of my all-time favorite black comedies - 1999's awesome Drop-Dead Gorgeous. Amber is played by Kirsten Einstein, while the deliciously evil and self-absorbed Becky Leeman is played by Denise Richards. And if you've never seen it, run and rent/stream/whatever RIGHT NOW! ^_^
person Dawn
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Darn you autocorrect!! That was Kirsten Dunst I typed in my dumb phone...
schedule May 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I KNOW THE ANSWER it is Pirates Of The Carribean: Dead Mans Chest and it is Captain Barbosa speaking after they have decided to go get Jack from the locker. If thats not right than....welll....I suck lol. I haven't watched the movie in ages and did anyone else think the fourth movie sucked? anyway please update soon!!
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Go, Hermione! I have had several moments in life when I wanted to just kiss someone and see what happened. That was perfect! Thank you, HG4eva
person SER
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting so far waiting to see where it goes. the quote is easy Jack Sparrow, Black Pearl, Jerry Bruickheimer