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by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person Kaida
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius :( But he's not alone. Next! Next! Next! I love the story!

To the game (it was easy, one of my favorite):
The fifth element: Korben Dallas's mother's words. Director/Writer: Luc Besson. By the way, as far as I know, the voice is Jill Mullan's
person Kaida
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Korben = Corbin
Sorry. I'm hungarian, and in my language it's writen/said like "Korben".
(Also: Sorry for my english, if it's not good. As I just wrote, I'm hungarian.)
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was excellent. Poor Lucius! Now for the movie quote, 'The Fifth Element', Corbin Dallas' mother. Gary Oldman played a villian in that movie too(he played Sirius Black in the Harry Potter movies)
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The movie was The Fifth Element and the sons name was Korben Dallas played by Bruce Willis.....Love your stories by the way and cant wait for the next chapter
person Irisheather
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dear mariteri: You write excellently, still doing well, I love the couple Severus / Hermione is my favorite and I appreciate that you put into this fic, loving each other as should be, maybe you could join them forever.
Could Lucio give jealousy to Severus and hereby make fall in love deeply and truly of Mione? It's just a suggestion.
I will keep your fic but please do not take too long to update. A big hug. Hasta la vista baby.
P:S: (Tell me, which movie comes this sentence!, It is my primary language).

person Dawn
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Glad Lucius is finally coming to grips with his trauma! (and really glad Severus & Hermione have begun getting together! woo!)

This chapter's quote is from Luc Besson's 1997 sci-fi action epic, The Fifth Element (or Fifth Elephant, as we call it in my house... lol) The line was spoken by the annoying mother of Korbin Dallas (Bruce Willis) while she was on the phone with President Lindberg (Tiny Lister). Fifth Elephant is another one of those uber-quotable movies that is part of the lexicon of our family to this day. "Mool-ti-pass!" "They know its a multipass!" ;-)
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If I haven't said before, this is a well done story with an under-used theme. As for your chapter 7 famous last words, one of my favorite movies, The Fifth Element.
person colao
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have no suggestions for improvement, I'm enjoying it as it is
person Amber
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this and I hope there is more soon and I like that Ginny isn't a brat hope there is more soon
person LydiaLovegood
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story so far! And that quote is from The Fifth Element, it was the mother of Bruce Willis' character, Korben Dallas. :) Milla Jovovich, who rocks my face off, is also in it! Love her. And of course, the incomparable Gary Oldman!! woo hoo! Okay, back to your story, great, cannot wait for the next chapter. :)