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by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person Amber
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow well Lucius got a shock :) hope that him and Severus talk soon about that that will be fun :)
person Kaida
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

I hate, that your chapters so shorts... :P

To the game:
Film: Jumanji
Directed: Joe Johnston
Stars: Kirsten Dunst as Judy, Bradley Pierce as Peter (and Robin Williams as Allan Parrish, Bonnie Hunt as Sarah)
The last line? Good question. Florica Vlad or Sarah Gilson. I tried to find it with the help of the google, but I wasn't able. Anyway, If I'm right, they are the two girl on the beach in the last scene, and one of them said the words.
person JuliaBlack
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The quote is from Jumanji starring Robin Williams and Bonnie Hunt.....Awesome story btw!
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Lucius is such an ass! I got nothing on the quote, sorry. I'll just take my fudge and run.
person genesismom
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love that movie, jimanji. the line is spoken by the two kids that are walking on the beach where it's washed up on and is slightly covered with sand. it was directed by joe johnson and wasn't sure if you wanted alan and sarah or if you wanted judy and peter. robin williams and bonnie hunt were great. It's sometimes surprizing what i like about stories. One of the things i like about this story is hermione's hearing aid. If everything could be solved with magic why would people die and just as tragic how would they live if everything was easy, just a wave of the wand. People need challenges, failures and disappointments just as much as they need success and pleasure. thanks for the reminder.
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First, I wish I had a man in my life who was always ready for me when I needed him. lol Second, someone please hit Lucius with a spell that causes him pain when he's an ass. I know he would spend about a year in pain, but he would eventually learn. Jerk! Thank goodness for Severus. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
schedule May 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awwww... I adore how you ended this chapter with Severous calling Hermione his beloved. That was wonderful.
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
whoo hoo!!! I just read all of this this morning and I really really find it fun to read! I laughed over quite a bit of it. You are really good with the quick and fun dialogue. Can't wait for more :)
person scifiaunt
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Mel Brooks' Spaceballs Joan Rivers was the actress that voiced
person LydiaLovegood
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Spaceballs!! That was the robot voiced by Joan Rivers, she said it to the princess, Daphne Zuniga. lol. Acted in, written and directed by Mel Brooks!! Loved it. Loved this chapter too, waiting on Lucius to start understanding some things and working through his pain and guilt and anger. Waiting on some more substance, though I do love snippits of Snape and Hermione. :)