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by Daydreamer

schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a great job putting in how Hermione feels :) It's like the pull is making her do things that she would normally NEVER do... like taking off her top lol... but it's like she's acting on instinct without over thinking things and when she does make a move it still feels right to her. I really like how they she is drawn to Severus and I love a protective Severus who can't deny her what she asks for lol. She's going to have him wrapped around her finger lol. I also really liked how she asked Severus if it was ok for her to leave and get some air. Even though he was confused about why she was asking him, it's like she acknowledged his as her protector and as such he would need to know that she was going. They are going to take care of each other.

Love your story :)

and I hope the sucky RL gets... less sucky. Reading is a great escape but writing takes focus and RL sometimes makes that impossible so don't feel bad when updates take awhile. Just remember that great stories like yours give others a pick me up too and we really appreciate that but don't forget to go reading other people's stories for your own pick me up when you need it.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It will be fun to see Hermione's reactions to feeling the pull toward Severus too :)
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank u for the update. Loved it... Liked the ending part with swirling magic. And albus cracks me up.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh perfect! the effect that you put on them at their meeting on waking. Very real. I see, soon
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you've written the pull between them. It's absolutely sigh-worthy. :-) I look forward to finding out what Albus now knows about the attack and what stopped it, and I hope Draco is not let off. He is too much like canon-Lucius to ever be let loose on the public again. I also look forward to Hermione finding out that she is bound to her professor. :-) Should prove interesting. lol Thank you!! HG4eva
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter. It was sweet yet also shows the connection the two are feeling. I can't wait to see where you take this.lease update soon!
schedule June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me that was a lot more then a Wizards' Oath.
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Missing your updates! Needing more. Oh I love me some possessive Snape hehe. I want to hear more about their magic bond. Hearts stars and clovers....sassy p
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, look forward to reading more soon!
schedule June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope and am glad what Draco might get whats coming to him. I love that Hermione and Snape will be getting closer in the future. So please update again soon I will try to wait for the next update. Hope they get closer soon.