rate_review Reviews

I luv this story, I usually don't like harm stories because they usually end up with one being favored over the others, and I hate that; but I can deal with this one.

I am hooked on this interesting story with intriguing new twists on how magic and curses can work. Draco with Harry is hot -- not sure how he'll be with Neville. Meanwhile, poor Hermione is still feeling crappy about her looks and her appeal after being in a sexless marriage. Couldn't you give her a couple of one-night steamy flings to relieve some tension and help her feel better? She deserves some great sex and soon. Just a suggestion: Theo Nott is intelligent and, because canon is vague about him, always a fine candidate for a character to be fleshed out (hee hee) for a fling with Hermione.

I like where the story is going, but why would Harry want to be bound to his room? What if the house elf and Draco were both incompacitated, wouldn't Harry be effectively trapped since he isn't allowed to leave without escort? Is he no longer Bill's partner in curse breaking?

lol That's a handy spell Draco has to get a naked Harry. And I was like 5 chapters behind! How in the world did that happen! Draco taking another concubine... then will a muggle concubine be next? Neville and Hermione? I guess it's easier to accept because no one is in love with each other. But when that happens?

really enjoying this, i hope you get a chance to update again soon, i can't wait to see who draco picks up next and how all the mates are going to wind up interacting with each other. keep up the great work :)

hummm, i'm not sure i like the whole concubine thing... that could be setting up a bad precedent for the future. lots of inequality and what not. wouldn't draco just deep six the laws when he becomes minister anyway? it seems a bit rash for har to bind and permanently alter himself for this. i feel for nev too, that's a hell of a secret to keep and the WW isn't really a tolerant one. i hope you have someone special lined up for him.

YAY!!!!! I was wondering when you were going to update!!!!! I am sooo glad I checked!!!!! Great update!!!!!!

Ack! You can stop it there! This just got super interesting!

oh, Il like this story and really want to know what will come of this.
I'm sure you know that in the muggle world that if two men would be able to have babies, they could have female too, only women could have only female because male have chromosome X and Y in their semen, but women only have XX in their eggs.
But as it is your world, it is your rules.

See you soon.
Phoenix 5

i love it!!!