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for Harry Potter and the Beastly Harem

by crmoon

person jen
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
God That was so incredibly Hot!!!
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So after reading a suggestion on the forum of my Weasley's Slut challenge, where the writer said that I need to give better reviews for the stories be they good or bad if I want more of these fics, I am going around and doing just that.

Now as much as I did enjoy the smuttiness of this story I do have one problem and that is the fact that this was just a one-shot. I don't mean to sound rude if I am, it's just that I would have loved this story even more if this was a multi-chapter story with the courting taking more time then instantly finding the mates as well as more in it then just the hot smut. However even if this story was a challenge I set up it was still your fic and I know that it is my own fault for not putting up more specifics on my challenge, this was so that an author felt free to do their own things as well.

Even so I still did enjoy this story and if I ever want a smutty, multi beast, one shot I will definitely read this again.
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I'm guessing the werewolf was Lupin? Because I wouldn't think Dumbledore would allow Fenrir on school grounds.
person galyardt
schedule June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is really good but i just have to say one thing
if you dont know this dogs have knots in there dicks when they have sex to make sure the have kids
i just think telling you this info will help you make you stories hotter
schedule May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was extremely perverse. I approve :)
person Nightmare
schedule April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the story :D!!!! But heres my question, who's the Were? I'm thinking it's Remus. Am I right? :)
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I enjoyed the read.
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is good. For a story, it's always best to come up with an idea that no one has come up with before, and you've succeeded. Great job!

And im the first reviewer! lol.
person Anon
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Creepy but good. <3