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ooooh, plotting planning and further plotting. most excellent, mwhahahaha. will ex riddle be able to have kids?
it looks like sev has things well in hand despite dumbles finagling in the back ground. i doubt dumbels will let it lie for long, but mean time, what he doesn't know he can't counter. So yay, up the 'dark' side!

very intriguing story so far, so many plots and twists and names to keep straight, but definitely not boring lol. i'm curious to see how the news is received by all the kids. keep up the good work, i look forward to more of this :)

I have read your previous works; Unlikely Heros is one of them. I like how you cleverly explain how Dumbles is not as amazing as the books portray him, for one he definitely seemed to tweak things his way and keep up the amazing clever storylines. I will at some stage write the plot bunny I have in my head but it is more challenging.

I love the story but you made a mistake on the birth record for lily; you said she's male.

Short but sweet. A surprisingly pleasant little interlude.

wow, dumble bumbles level of manipulative bastard is rising to unbidden heights. May the fall out crush him completely. well done on keeping the future past streams straight to date. Still, it's nice to know even he has to bow to the goblins when they start throwing their weight around. Nice to know theres SOMEONE out there that can pull the old slime up.
I look forward to seeing how V's ret con goes.

I knew Dumbledore was dastardly but this is down right diabolical. Excellent update.

What a bunch of shocking revelations! I can't wait for more!

He does the past changing thing sooooooooooo good. I look forward to seeing how things fall out this time cause you know dumbles isn't just gonna roll over and it will take time to unravel his plots.

I do like your stories but I am noticing that you tend to reuse the same back stories for Snape and Lucius quite a bit. I've seen the I came home and found my parents dead in all three of your stories I read. I admit that there is still quite a bit different between each one, but I just wanted to make that assessment. Also, with regards to this story. I do love the pretense of it. I cannot wait to see what he does with the information that Lily is his sister. I cannot help but wonder if he will blood adopt both his self and his twin sister. Would Lily take well with being removed from her family?