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for Thou Shalt Not!

by KusanoSaku

person Anon
schedule April 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
lol. oh, the plots and plans... fortunately, most of them are beneficent... i would pity the abusive muggles, but hey, abusive. What ever crap they may have been through to end up that way, you do NOT take it out on your kids. You just don't. Kids are a gift not everyone can have after all. Magical kids, i imagine, even more so.
person Jan
schedule April 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love how both Alaric and Aurelius seem to find friendship within each other ^_^ and share a love for research! please update chapter 26 soon.
person ChaosLady
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...
person Justpucky
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
They can either exorcise Binns, or just move the class to a new classroom... I always thought Binns was such an Automaton that he would lecture weather the students were present or not.
person starr
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update !!!! nice to see Adult Snape & this Tom get along so well !!!!! hopefully they will fix a lot of thing in there world now... sorry really not good with the new names they just don't stick :(
person Anon
schedule April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So long Binns...
I really like all the things they come up with to improve the wizarding world - most of them are overdue anyway.
person staar
schedule February 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Like you say Dumbells is in the nut house !!!!!! That serves him and hope he stays there too......Snape (older one ) has almost everyone against the dumbbell ...Thanks for the update !!!!!!!
person ChaosLady
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Seems the story is winding down, maybe you should skip some time and have a chapter concerning a possible Remus and young Severus romance, Aurelius' and Lucius' bonding and James Potter's and Lily Prince's wedding and whatever other weddings or bindings you have planned. Then have an epilogue about their various children that would include the time where the Battle of Hogwarts would've taken place if Severus hadn't changed the timeline so drastically. Then include the time of the epilogue of DH, and their grandchildren.
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyable chapter.
person ChaosLady
schedule February 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is much more light-hearted than the previous one. Excellent update!