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I must say this story has really sucked me in.I'm mot sure who Harry should end up with. you've made the story much more than a" harry and ginny don't work because ginnys a bitch" its so complicated which is great! but I was really hoping James and teddy's relationship wouldn't be a repeat of Harry and Severus' but at this rate it might be. please update soon my heart is breaking from all the unresolved angst!

I check for chapter 7 LITERALLY everyday.

Great couple of chapters. Comment on the therapy session: it is important for any relationship to have a level of honesty and communication to stay healthy and strong. I've never been in therapy either, and the reasons for the mock-separation excercise seem sound, though I don't think any therapist (in real life) would take it so far as to last a week or more...if they'd ever use it in any way other than an in-session mental exercise. Still, you're keeping it interesting with everyones' individual perceptions of the sitution. I have to caution one thing; don't make everyone (or almost) everyone gay/bi. It's statistically unrealistic. If it really were that commonplace, it would have become more socially acceptable and not be a point of contention by the sheer numbers of populous that would have the majority of opinion. (Did quick search) - "Estimates of the incidence of homosexuality range from 1% to 10% of the population, usually finding there are slightly more gay men than lesbians." - and it's been proven that gay parents do not make gay children, either by environment nor genetics. (Sorry, not trying to preach)

I have just one question, WHEN CAN WE EXPECT THE NEXT CHAPTER????!!!!!
Your story is amazing, excellent grammer and it atually sticks to characters. I hate Snarry stories where Sev turns all soppy and nice. It just isnt him. So well done nd please add ur facebook page url on ur next chapter so I can add you. Love your story. BJ

My friend think its unfair for me to be a bit mad at Harry for cousing more damege at this point for staying with Ginny but if he keep this up no one will truly be happy but if he go to Snape, yeah Ginny will hurt for a while but she'll get over it in time. It's oveouse he is not in love with her. I hope things work for them. On the another note I wonder if someone will point out to James that he is the Snape of his relationship.

This story is both so wonderful and so hard to read. I go from sympathetic to angry and back with each character, sometimes in the same paragragh.

I am glad that James at least feels a little bad over his and Teddy's afair. I get so frustrated at how vocally angry he is when right after he went to basically play the Snape role in his own triangle.

Anyway, I'm glad you're back with this story. It makes my heart ache, but I can't wait to see it play out.

OMFG Harry is really annoying me.
Seriously, why can't he try and talk with his kids (at least try) instead of going to freaking Snape when the going gets tough.
He is right this is very much his fault as well as Snape's.
Albus is doing the best out of all of them.
Lily is too adorable.
James and Teddy need to stop following in Harry's and Snape's mistakes. It shows very much how the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Teddy is very much as guilty as James. He needs to stop playing Val.
I really hope some light is going to show soon, mostly with Harry not freaking running away all the time.

damn this is good!

I love the relationship between Harry and Snape. They are crackling! They are ON FIRE! This is what makes this good Snarry. Damn I wish I could write it like you! I'm attempting to write one now...but it's a sorry case in comparison to this gem.

oh god you have to write more. this is soooo gooood!! It's so engaging, I love them all, I love how you've characterized them. Let me make it known that I NEVER read fics with the Potter children but this one just drew me in!! I think Albus is my favorite. Poor Severus as well. Lily, too, heheh.

It's so sad and intense...James I like also, he's right to be pissed off.

It makes me think about a situation I'm in involving a person...and indecisiveness...all the pain Harry's giving to those he loves, I wouldn't wish that on anyone!

Please, PLEASE update!!