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This story is interesting! I've already read the first two chapters on ff.net and realized that full sex scenes won't be posted on there, so...I decided to come here!! *grins* I'll be reviewing on here and the other one, if I can't review on here then that means that I can't review for the day or that I was too excited and forgot to review.

Good chapter~! :D

*grins* I wonder what happened to Hermione and Ron and what was in the papers that everyone was reading? I hope nothing too bad happened!

And I can't wait until the sex scenes come and when Harry starts to realize that he can't ignore this and starts to accept that he is a magical creature and that he would need a mate!

Good chapter~! :D

Love it, cant wait for chapter 63 ^_^

I'm glad that theo has that support. with the trouble har attracts, he'll need it.
interesting. So Blaise is going to be a gheyo huh... i wonder who he'll end up with.
good thing Charlie learned those tips... i have a feeling they're going to get used a lot.
while it was gutsy of theo to take his stand and be man... i've a feeling none of them were thinking of the effect on har. He just can't catch a break, can he.
So all is not running smoothly in the hellhounds house... kennel... whatever. I hope it'll be safe to bring Mio there.

Formatting is really weird for the latest chapter! The area around the text is all white whereas the spaces in between the paragraphs are the usual tan-ish color. Perhaps re-upload it?

blinks... not entirely sure what to make of or say about this chappie. I'm guessing the caspered weren't done so voluntarily?
Well, hopefully Theo should be okay now that there isn't quite so much infighting in his head.

I really like Quinn and hope that he might be a future addition to Harry's circle. He already seems to care for Harry more than the others and when Harry sent out that wave of magic to help him I cannot help but wonder if Harry's considering him on a subconscious level. Also to go back to the Jun and George Arc, I'm not sure if she would travel to Navarah or not, but I have a feeling she's a distant relation of Harry through the Evanson's. They have the same green eyes after all. Also will she end up being George's mentor or would she be a good possibility for Charley. I would love it if after she's done with Ron, who will more than likely be a Tavak, that she'll go by and pick up Molly and Ginny. I have a feeling that Ginny is a submissive of Dragon kind. Perhaps Blase could be her alpha though it's likely that her elemental would be fire. Would fire and storm work well together as Sub and Alpha? Also, is Harry going to pick up a warrior before heading back to the Wizarding World? I hope that you plan on having Regulus meeting Harry at some point through Jun. I would love to see how he would react and I have a feeling that Harry's Mentor was Sirius Black. Also are Harry's parents Caspers? I cannot wait to read the next chapter. This is a wonderfully original take on dragon inheritances. You created a whole new creature without picking apart the Dracken. Also the circle idea is much different than any other type of mating. I also enjoy your carrier Maria and the way they can transfer talents and information through their fingers. I can't help but wonder what Dumbledore knew of the seals on Harry and if any of them were placed on him. If Sirius Black was the mentor then would they be able to test him against Regulus' signature. If that is the case then Jun might have to bring him there with her. Would they allow him to enter because he's a Tavak half-breed but is mated to a witch of Dragon Kind. Would a healer be able to fix his ailment or not because Jun would've done it if it could be fixed, right?

There is so much going on, so many stories wrapped into one that it becomes more and more confusing. You hardly give answers to all those questions coming up (i.e. what's going to happen with Hermione, where are Molly and Ginny and how are they holding up, what's with the Weasleys, mindfucker-bitch, ..., ...) and you're introducing new people, happenings and shit EVERY new chapter. Stop it. Not even Talkien was THAT crazy. ;)
Don't get me wrong, I don't mind you introducing side-stories (I do like them, they give a deeper background and make a story more believable), just please do so either in smaller doses or as seperate stories. For example, I didn't mind the chapter on Quinn and his family, it wasn't exactly necessary but it was a nice to know outtake and didn't start another new side-story. But now you startet some new side-story with Blaise and that I don't like - not because of Blaise, but because you are going to stretch the main storyline and already there side-stories even further apart. And I would really like to come to a point where Harry and his mates are given a break, get their Gheyo-mate(s) and their Pareya-mate(s), get Quinn as another mate (please!), and finally go back to Hogwarts to kick Dumbles ass.
So, that said, I really like your story, even if it does confuse me at times ;) :)
tilt

Loving it! Please update chapter 62 soon ^_^

So much is going on with our boys, I can't wait till everything is peachy perfect with them. Please update chapter 61 soon ^_^