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January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
re reading Mimei's is a bitch for saying that about quinn messed it last time the bitch
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January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
it should take you 4 chapter of the healing to fix harry than harry mates with someone than he gets quinn i hope soon i also hope herimone wakes up forgive in wants harry with her
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January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
so good i don't review here because its a pain but i do love this story your only allowed 5 reviews per story a day than it takes forever but hoping you update chapter 69 and 70 want more
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December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So far, loving this story :) I've also looked for pairings with Charlie & Harry, and find Theo a good extra for that relationship. Thanks for this one :)
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December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
first off, could i just say, link pls. i have no idea where to go looking on ff net to find a replies page so a link would be a very helpful thing to have thanks.
on to the chappie. you'd think a fighter type would be more in tune with her instincts but ilsa seems to be flat out denying/ blocking hers. Still... hang on, wait, what?! i know that drac babies are mostly composed of energy but how the heck does that work. i mean, ilsa hasn't got the right parts to be injecting energy into a male sub and since when can they store up energy/seed? from 16 years ago. also, what's this whole cursed twin thing? how many kids does ilsa have anyway?!
ah well, it seems that pair have made a major brake though in the lack of relationship. she must have been in some state to completely disregard her sub like that. dropping her kids on him to raise sounds kinda harsh too.
so, har's an empath huh? yeah, that'd explain a lot. just what he didn't need, something else knocking him for six. i hope they can find him a teacher, get him some shielding, something.
was that 'gift' blocked a bit by the pile of seals he had on him, cause i reckon, a fully functional untrained empath whose been through all he has would be a total basket case by now... thought the links to his mates and the caspered riding shottie probably helped.
still, on the whole, good grief, what a mess.
on to the chappie. you'd think a fighter type would be more in tune with her instincts but ilsa seems to be flat out denying/ blocking hers. Still... hang on, wait, what?! i know that drac babies are mostly composed of energy but how the heck does that work. i mean, ilsa hasn't got the right parts to be injecting energy into a male sub and since when can they store up energy/seed? from 16 years ago. also, what's this whole cursed twin thing? how many kids does ilsa have anyway?!
ah well, it seems that pair have made a major brake though in the lack of relationship. she must have been in some state to completely disregard her sub like that. dropping her kids on him to raise sounds kinda harsh too.
so, har's an empath huh? yeah, that'd explain a lot. just what he didn't need, something else knocking him for six. i hope they can find him a teacher, get him some shielding, something.
was that 'gift' blocked a bit by the pile of seals he had on him, cause i reckon, a fully functional untrained empath whose been through all he has would be a total basket case by now... thought the links to his mates and the caspered riding shottie probably helped.
still, on the whole, good grief, what a mess.
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December 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Everything is becoming very interesting, I cant wait to see whats going to happen with everyone, Hermione when shes finally up and about, and with her hound ^_~
Please update chapter 69 soon.
Please update chapter 69 soon.
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December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, i stumbled across this story the other night and have spent the past couple days between work and such reading it from start to end. you've done an amazing job with this, you've got a very intricate world setup as well as the creatures inhabiting it and their reactions with each other. and omg i feel so bad for the weasley kids, torn between their mom and hteir dad and essentially having to choose one over the other, and i can't believe you did that to fred and george though i understand why too and i can't wait to see how this is going to work out between all the siblings (and especially the twins) when the two races are apparently mortal enemies. i'm also really enjoying the pov's from the other kids and what they're all up to and how they're managing to handle things on their ends. and i have to say, i really do like quinn and kyle and the guards for them and i'd love to see more of them, and i vote yes for quinn as one of the mates. kinda want to see luna meet up with kyle or the funny named red-eyed guard too lol. amazing work with this, keep it up because i'm so very much looking forward to more :D
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November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really like the story. I've read 40 chapters over the course of 3 days! And its a school week! Haha.
The only thing is, this morning TBDH isn't showing up on AFF. Thought I'd give you a heads up.
Is the FFN version exactly the same? I don't want to miss anything while its down on AFF.
You're awesome! :)
~EmoPumpkin
The only thing is, this morning TBDH isn't showing up on AFF. Thought I'd give you a heads up.
Is the FFN version exactly the same? I don't want to miss anything while its down on AFF.
You're awesome! :)
~EmoPumpkin
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November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
couldn't find the forum the link was supposed to take us too, but oh well.
i'm glad the meeting between the drag, har and the rest was relatively peaceful and helpful har still has so much to learn and a bonding to complete.
i find it sad the ilsa is still on the outs with most of her adoptive circle. why is she fighting so hard not to care for a pregnant sub the way her instincts dictate.
luna, despite her fluff brained reputation, is a pretty practical person when needs must. I think she'll be fine.
with har's collection of classmates, i meant, how did they get the way they are critta status wise, creature inheritance?
i'm glad the meeting between the drag, har and the rest was relatively peaceful and helpful har still has so much to learn and a bonding to complete.
i find it sad the ilsa is still on the outs with most of her adoptive circle. why is she fighting so hard not to care for a pregnant sub the way her instincts dictate.
luna, despite her fluff brained reputation, is a pretty practical person when needs must. I think she'll be fine.
with har's collection of classmates, i meant, how did they get the way they are critta status wise, creature inheritance?
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November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear your life has been so crazy :( I hope it settles down soon!
Also, thank you so much for your detailed reply about Pareya, Gheyo and everything else I asked about :D I love the world you've created, so all the little nitty gritty details fascinate me. But onto this week's review!
No more Quinn for 4 days? Aww, man... :p I didn't mind this chapter, but I have to say that the previous two were my favourite :D I loved the different greetings Theo had with Harry and Charlie, they were both just so "them". :D Who is the blonde haired stranger? Dun dun dun... My first, obvious thought was Draco, but that doesn't sound right. Guess I'll have to wait and see :p I also enjoyed Quinn and Theo's little byplay where Quinn basically gets Theo's permission to kick some serious Umbridge-ass. It seems like he's looking forward to it :D Harry's hysterics threw me off for a minute though. I was like, ack, what happened? *pats Harry's head* There, there, Harry, no need to be sad. You have this massive house and your mates to yourself for four days. :D
I remembered some of my questions, but please, feel free to ignore them or come back to them later when you have more time. I know how crazy uni can be, and it sounds like the rest of your life is nuts too at the moment :(.
I was wondering, how did Aracle get elected Rheyo, if he wasn't originally the Alpha of one of the twin's circles? Or one of their Betas? Because you said that Aracle was added after the merging the Deveraine circle? Also, how many Betas can you have? Just the one?
These are slightly more random questions, but being a nitty gritty details person, I couldn't resist asking. Why was Kyle adopted into the Kalzik circle? Did something happen to his own family? And more randomly still, how does money work in a circle? As in a while back, Theo paid for food with a charm I think, hanging off a bracelet? Do Alphas manage money for the entire circle, and pay for them?
Hopefully my questions haven't bugged you too much :S And please, again, feel free to ignore them if you don't have time to answer :) RL takes priority.
Also, thank you so much for your detailed reply about Pareya, Gheyo and everything else I asked about :D I love the world you've created, so all the little nitty gritty details fascinate me. But onto this week's review!
No more Quinn for 4 days? Aww, man... :p I didn't mind this chapter, but I have to say that the previous two were my favourite :D I loved the different greetings Theo had with Harry and Charlie, they were both just so "them". :D Who is the blonde haired stranger? Dun dun dun... My first, obvious thought was Draco, but that doesn't sound right. Guess I'll have to wait and see :p I also enjoyed Quinn and Theo's little byplay where Quinn basically gets Theo's permission to kick some serious Umbridge-ass. It seems like he's looking forward to it :D Harry's hysterics threw me off for a minute though. I was like, ack, what happened? *pats Harry's head* There, there, Harry, no need to be sad. You have this massive house and your mates to yourself for four days. :D
I remembered some of my questions, but please, feel free to ignore them or come back to them later when you have more time. I know how crazy uni can be, and it sounds like the rest of your life is nuts too at the moment :(.
I was wondering, how did Aracle get elected Rheyo, if he wasn't originally the Alpha of one of the twin's circles? Or one of their Betas? Because you said that Aracle was added after the merging the Deveraine circle? Also, how many Betas can you have? Just the one?
These are slightly more random questions, but being a nitty gritty details person, I couldn't resist asking. Why was Kyle adopted into the Kalzik circle? Did something happen to his own family? And more randomly still, how does money work in a circle? As in a while back, Theo paid for food with a charm I think, hanging off a bracelet? Do Alphas manage money for the entire circle, and pay for them?
Hopefully my questions haven't bugged you too much :S And please, again, feel free to ignore them if you don't have time to answer :) RL takes priority.