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awwwww, not another dragon sub har... pooh. still, this is different enough to hold my interest. the wings especially brought up a good point. Freshly hatched wings usually need working or primping to bring them up to par. most people forget about that or just go, 'hey, magical creature, fully formed wings are included.' anywho, keep up t good work.

Cliffhanger

love love love it! Your pairing is a welcome change of pace from all the Harry/Severus/DracoorLucius. Not that I don't love those stories but there's so few Harry/Charlie or Harry/Theo! And here you've managed to combine them :) yay!! Kudos to you for attempting to keep it realistic, I don't think Harry would ever be completely submissive to others, maybe respect for them would make him defer to their judgment but he'd still keep his independence where he could. I can'tw ait for the next update!

Wow, Theo's being very nice considering Harry has barely said anything to him. At least he made it clear he's not a death eater, but what if some other slytherin, or even Draco, calls him on being nice to Harry? This looks like a cool story, can't wait to read more!

his story sound interesting, and looks promising, can't wait for chapter 4 to be posted ^_^

this ie really good

Intriguing beginning. I have not yet made up my mind regarding this fic; it's far too early for that. However, I'll wait and see what becomes of it before I offer any judgement. To be frank, I am not thrilled with the pairing(s), but I love creature!fics so I decided to give it a chance. I hope it'll be bottom!Harry, too. :)

good oh. I hate doormat subs. i can't see theo or charlie being to thrilled about har having to go off hunting horcruxs or topping voldi so things will be interesting indeed. so will har be middle sub or breeder?

Oh my, this is quite good. I do have some questions though. What was in the papers and where are Harrys friends? They are his friends right? Is this a Dumbles bashing story? I'll keep reading either way but I would like to know so I can prepare myself. How is Charlie going to become a part? Have I understood right and Harry can change into a dragon? Will there be mpreg? Is Harry really a extint creature? Are there really no more of his species around? Are there going to be horocruxes in this story, is that why the scar did not disapear? Are you posting this story anywhere else? Looking forward to the next chapter and hope you have fun writing!

personally i would like to see the pairing be harry/collin and harry/dennis with harry as the domenant of course.