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for The Aftermath of War

by ReighHPFiction

schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering is Wizardgmot ask Harry to live with the Malfoy's in hope that they would piss him off and he would regret his decision. Hopefully Harry will still have time to bring Grimmulad back to a livable state. Moving along nicely
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a really great start. Has got me wanting to read more so that's good lol :) Cant wait for the next chapter, pleaseeeeeeeeeee don't keep me waiting too long? pwetty pwease with a Lucius with whipped cream on top???? lol Keep up the good work! ;)
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I want to read more.
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This has a lot of promise. Looking forward to what comes next.
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start, although i am hoping that you will not bash ginny and keep her in character. To many harry/lucius or harry/draco stories have ginny bashing as it is and i would very much like to see an author who can make a pairing like this work without making her out to be the bad guy or the malfoys some karma houdini victims.
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i think that the debt should be called in so she can't use it on harry again and i hope luc and harry work better
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i think i can sort of see where this is going to go... well, luc can whinge to hard if what i think is going to happen does. Grimmauld is a serious step up from azkaban anyway, and i think luc would REALLY want to avoid going back there, even without the dementors running around. of course, luc will probably be utterly disgusted anyway, he'll just be more... upper crust about it. :P
still, it remains to see if har can swing it first.