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for Ar Sciatháin Sciobtha

by SenNightShade

schedule March 2, 2019 at 12:00 AM

This story was wonderful, but it had one major problem- it stopped at chapter five, and I was left hanging. So sad.

schedule January 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Are you serious! Someone left you a bad review ... let me guess - 'It's really hard to keep all the different Drayche clans straight in my head... so you have to make sure that because I can't be bothered to retain even the gist of them all or use clues that you write or even just enjoy the story as it is written and absorb it as I read - YOU have to provide me with the complete list of it at the bottom of every page/chapter!" That about right? LOL, what a shame that people don't have brains anymore.

I am totally enjoying your story - thank you for sharing your brilliant story. I actually somehow just discovered that there is a HP AU section and found this. So glad I did. Sorry you have to put the list on every page. Most stories and especially books, put it at the beginning or end. For extremely long chapter stories, what would actually be broken into multiple books, there might be an additional note recap written part way through. So, remember, it is not your responsibility to provide it just because people can't be bothered to think for themselves. :D Brilliant story, thanks for sharing! (Leslie calmzone1@gmail.com)
schedule January 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, well thought out. Hope life gives you the chance to update soon, but if not, it will be well worth the wait. :D
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!!! I hope that you will continue, cause I would like to see Harry back with his real family
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It's so much fun to read; the pace is fast, the plot interesting, and on and on and on. Please write more! I can't get enough. Thank you for the story and until the next chapter!
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just read the prologue, lot of info to take in, but it sounds very intriguing *skips off to read mroe*
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
#2- very in depth story even just getting starting, but i can't wait to see how the story's going to progress, how harry's true nature will change things (compared to canon) or if they will at all
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
#3- lol well that's one way to bring him out of the closet as it were. loved his interaction with the toy version too
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nice try at an explanation on dumbles' part, too bad he just fucked himself over with harry. can't wait to see everybody else's reaction now
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
#5- yay for good twins! boo for obnoxious ron though harry definitely put a stop to his bullying, whether he meant to or not lol. wonderful story so far, keep up the great work guys, i can't wait to see what happens next :D