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for The Journey

by PhaedrusTodorov

person Pooh_pw
schedule December 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I don't know why you abandoned this story, you were off to such a lovely start. Maybe one day you will pick back up where you left off and see it through til the end. Blessed be.

schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This seems interesting so far. Would like to read more, but I am confused about one thing. Extracting memories for a pensieve isn't painful and the person doesn't feel anything when it happens. Why did Snape have to relive his experience? Why did the pensieve project? Why didn't Dumbledore just stick his head in like all the other times?
schedule April 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting start can't wait to see where it goes
person Jak3811
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow I love it, sad about the baby but he is a spy for the great evil its not like lord Voldy is a nice person, i hope granger can get to him, I would not like to be called a child by anyone but my parents.
person Lauren_W
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Hermione is one ballsy woman in this and I like it! I'm interested to see what she sees in that pensive.
schedule April 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no no no, Hermione! You DO NOT want to see that! An actual shudder just ran through me imagining the horror. Well, you've hooked me, so please update again soon. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule April 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this really caught my attention. Instead of Hermione being the damsel in distress it's severus who is needing help. Update again soon please.