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for The Shards Of His Beloved

by Bundaycarrottreats

schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
thank you thank you thank you thank you! I just cried over this chapter. You wrote it perfectly. You described it perfectly what would happen to a child who went through the loss of a parent... the change in personality after their world has changed so drastically and clinging to what they have. And Draco was described perfectly too... anger and heartbreak at what happened and wanting to protect and reassure his son that he is loved and will not have his world destroyed again.

But silly Draco blaming God... he was given Harry Potter who would never stop looking for his son and who will do everything in his power to protect and care for them. It will be interesting to see how Draco reacts when he realizes how much Harry has done to help him and to get justice for what happened to Draco.

I really really also liked how Draco's power came out without him even realizing it. Maybe it will help him to break the slave bond he has on him.

This was a truly wonderful chapter and I am so glad the torture (and it was torture) has ended!
person paper angels
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay!! scorpius is back, it's great! i hope it would help harry and draco's relationship!!
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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I love your story i lost it for a while but i am glad I found itagain more please when you can thank you.....
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the title, suits the story. I can't wit to see love warm Draco and liven him up a bit.
person Star
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, this story is so good.
person luvdreams
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! LOVE IT!!!!
person grav
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The proper way to drink absinthe is with Ice cub not with fire. Fire is more effectively way to show in the cinema and was created on the end of 20th century. The real drinker use watter or air. Look on wikipedia for example.
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy the two are finally reunited. I really hope that something can be done about that corrupt government. I also want to know when Harry is going to kick Ginny out. She never really wanted the kids as much as she wanted her career so why not leave them with Harry? I know I am never pleased, but I cannot wait until your next update.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi again! Oh finally, finally! What a fantastic way to reunite them...! When I understood where you were going at the beginning, I jumped in my seat! I practically held my breath during the reunion at the orphanage! Oh how lovely. And Scorpius is behaving just as i imagined he would, around Draco and the others. Oh lucky lucky Draco! I have been waiting for this for so long! Please, keep the chapters coming.
person Annette92
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg Im so glad Draco has Scorpius back! From the sounds of it, Scorpius is a very sweet boy and deserves his daddy. I nearly cried:)