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for The Shards Of His Beloved

by Bundaycarrottreats

person Leania07
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, Harry is feeling disgusted with himself, and Draco is lower than self-loathing. I hope Ginny isn't going to take advantage of this 'slave' control and cause Draco a lot of torment and pain. I await the next chapter to see how things progress.

Leania
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please update soon I'm really interested!
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now Draco has someone who is powerful enough to help find his son.
schedule April 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that Draco hasn't forgotten his son! I wonder what chores Harry will end up giving to Draco... and fifteen years is soooo long to be banned from magic! They so need to get rid of slavery in their timeline. AND please please please have Harry track down and get Draco's son back for him!!! That is so in my mind as I read the story. Draco is such a good father and that is the most painful thing ever. I don't think he'd be able to really accept or focus on much of anything without knowing where his son is and if he is safe and happy... which I doubt is possible for the little boy because he isn't used to being around people. He will be totally panicked and devestated to lose everything he's known.
person blackcurrent
schedule April 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope Hermione can stop this madness of wizarding world.
person paradise
schedule April 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written. I like the emotions. The saddest part was when Draco was saying good bye to Scorpius in his thoughts =(.
Please more chapters soon!
person Makoslits
schedule April 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I feel so sorry for Draco. I hope he gets to see Scorpis soon! Can't wait for your next update!
person Nubia
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
when I finish to read ''To find the missing lifeline '' I felt happy for Draco now this new history I hope see the side dark the human.
but too the other side
person Jien
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story going please do update more.

I'm hanging on every word :)
schedule April 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor draco! more please i would like to see where you take this