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for The Shards Of His Beloved

by Bundaycarrottreats

schedule May 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to write a good and worthy review but i just don't know what to write to let you know how brilliant your story is! I loved every single word
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schedule May 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Harry has been looking for Draco's son and that he is going after those that hurt Draco. It will be interesting to see how Draco reacts when he finds out. He'll probably call him a do-gooder and yell that he didn't ask for his help lol.
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The Story is lovely, I love it, really, I cant wait for chapter no6, its beautiful i hope you dont
leave the story I really wish hapiness for Draco, and love the way Harry takes care of him, its a really
good story. congratulations and keep the good work
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
and by the way, your fanfic find the missing life line is my favorite H/D fanfic of all times. and let me tell you this story is beautiful too, hahahaha congrats, i think you are my favorite fanfiction author.
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating, I've been waiting for this next chapter. Loved the part with Draco where he has a fit in front of Harry. Good for Draco, in a way. To get it all out, I mean. Loved the way you describe Draco's inner turmoil, it's so vivid and colourfully explained that I truly sympasized with him. I actually recognized myself in some of it, since I've had some breakdowns myself. Loved the way you described the 'spider' in his chest. Your words and the description gave me the chills. Had no trouble imagining his situation and what it felt like with it crawling on the inside. I find myself greatly concerned about Scorpius and his whereabouts, hoping there will be a reunion. If the boy turns up dead, I will actually be weeping in front of my computer. I also liked the part with the sphinx talking to Draco by his sickbed. Brilliant, loved the way you've spun historical stuff into the story. Just my cup of tea! It gives the sense of her being a real creature with lots of wisdom. Oh, how I wish that your chapters were longer! Anyway, keep up the good work! You are officially ranked as my current reading story on my profile page.
person anon
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i have been following this story because i am a hardcore H/D fan going on 7 yrs now.I like the premise and all the inherent possibilities in this world you have created and all am hoping for is a happy ending but the journey is also important. I hope you plan on making this a long read because i see this becoming a favorite.PS where is scorpius? and is there going to be ginny-bashing very good work...next chapter pweease
person Nubia
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In this chapter, I felt sorry for everything that happened with Draco first Voldemort and now end up as SLAVE losing her son, hubo justicia for your parents Porque Harry penso que era lo correcto,now I need wait will happen in the history.

person kat
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I so hope that Draco gets his son back very soon.
person liebe herz
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love Harry more and more! Now I see Draco's in good hands because Harry's going to take care of him
I love everything about this chap even if Draco's breakdown was very sad and almost made me cry
person luvdreams
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
is Scorpius ever going to be found? If not is Harry ever going to tell Draco what people think happened to Scorpius? It's so sad if he's actually dead!!