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Hi again
Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Oh dear, ...you really take it one step further with each chapter. Self-harming is such a complex issue for many people, and I'm glad you included something like this. I never saw it coming, and it gave me very mixed feelings. It really challenged me as a reader, and it really gives Draco's character that extra layer of utter darkness. I particulary like the way you paint Harry through Draco's eyes. The Saviour...!
I'm not sure I agree with Harry. I kept coming back to his decision about letting Draco have free will in this matter about the self-harming. Would I have done the same? I'm not sure I would, had I been Draco's mistress and been in Harry's position. In all, a subject which poses a challenge to the reader. It's brilliant. And dear Harry, all praise to he who tries to establish some contact with Draco, taking all his crap, if you don't mind me saying.
The section about Draco's thoughts concerning his 15 years in slavery and where Scorpius would be when the service was over with, was heart-wrenching. Had I been Draco, I would have waited until Scorpius would have been eleven, and I would have found an excuse to be at the platform to see if I could find Scorpius. As a mother, I sympathise with him very much. Please, please let them be reunited again soon!!

So good! I.LOVED.IT! poor Harry! How is he going to start getting along with Draco if all his efforts are thrown in his face ?! :-( But I loved how he reacted to Draco's cutting. Still refuses to use his power. I pity them both

Best story ever! New chapter please!

Wow! I loved your previous story. I just found your new one and caught up. You are an amazing writer and invoke many emotions in the readers. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

please don't keep me waiting.
i love this fic more than any fic Ive ever read

When a person is in mourning lives 5 stages, denial, anger, covenant, depression, acceptance. I think Draco is in the IRA can not do anything to change the past but at this present is a SLAVE and away from your child is very different to the paternal and maternal love, wonderful chapter.

I think you need to do some work with voicing Albus. His character seems to be too young and too old at the same time. Most times, if a child is talking as much and as often as Al is in this chapter, they're around 4-6 and have a different sort of sentence structure. I think you should take a look at some baby/toddler youtube videos to get an idea of how they talk. For example, they usually forget to add in the little words like the/a/in/on/of/etc. and they rarely understand the basics of manners until ages 6-8.

Other than that, the story was great! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Please continue this story, it's really well written. I've really enjoyed it and make sure nothing bad has happened to Scorpious, Draco would probably kill himself.

I know it would be so easy for Harry to order Draco around so I'm glad he doesn't. All I can think about is waiting for Draco to find his son... maybe he will be in one of the shops, maybe Harry's son will spot him... it's driving me crazy!!! arrggg!!!!

Awww!!! Al is sooo cute!!! Draco sounds like one of those parents where other people's children annoy him. I wish they'd find word of Scorpius. I'm sooo glad Harry hasn't given up. I had half hoped they'd spot him in Diagon. Draco can be a brat. *sigh*