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Please, please finish the story... Please??..?

Please write an end to your story... Its just so good I can't believe it will be forever unfinished!

Trying to be a good person here and not read and run :P this is a great fic, you need to carry it on!!!

Once I sent you a review at fanfiction.net regarding your other story (To find the missing lifeline) saying that that was my favorite story of all times and I sure as hell youd reread it some time from then. Years have passed, I didn't remember the name of your story, but I managed to find it again by googling some main parts of the plot. Then I've reread it and came to see your other stories, and found this one. I'm in love with this one as much as I'm in love with the other. I've already read tons of fics (believe me!) and there's no comparison out there, you're the best writer I've ever had the luck to find. I don't know when was the last time you've posted here, but please please plase don't stop! You're really awesome!

I sent you a message a few days ago on live journal, but I am doubting wether you finally received... Basically I was trying (as hard as I can) to convince you yo write a new Chapter for The Shards of His Beloved... I was reading it when you posted a new chapter each week more less and have been waiting for the new one ever since... Would you please write this story... for another 50 chapters or so? ;D
"please, please pleaseeeeeeee!!!"

When are you coming back. What happened to you!!

Hi, I'm brazilian, so forgive me the lack of fluence in ur language. I really expect u ro go on with this story, because it's really well written. Waiting for the next chap.

Do u intend to find the death eater who is draco's rapist? And how do u intend to explain his pregnacy? I think it's important to understand why only he could bear a child, even if that are other gay pureblood couples.

My congratulations.

This story needs more chapters! It is amazing, please update soon!:)

More? Please? your doing an amazing job and i really want to see this story go all the way through.
RoxasElric

I think you are doing a phenomenal job with this story! I am really enjoying it. Keep up the great work and I will continue to read it. I would like to give you one small piece of advice, and it's one that all authors have to learn, as I too made this mistake until somebody told me. Head Hopping--don't do it. It's jarring to the reader. Try not to change point of view too often. Try to stay in one head through an entire scene. When you do switch heads do it on a new chapter, or if it's mid chapter, do a hard line break so readers know that you are switching the POV. Your writing is great! I love the details you put in and I love this plot. I feel so bad for Draco, losing his little boy and then being raped. I am intrigued! I write Dramione, but my guilty pleasure is Drarry, even if I don't like writing it, I do love reading it. LOL Good job! Update!