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for Controlled Emotions

by LeviosaHex

schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh this fic is good! I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter, because this fic deserves it!!! aaaggh it's very...I really feel they are in-character and that the emotional stuff is well-written, and I like the psychology stuff, it makes me think about my own life. ALso the intimate scenes are hot...=D can't wait for more! heheheheh....

I like Hermione's filthy mind. That made me laugh out loud. =D
schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it's so GOOD! The convo, the anger Harry felt, I'm glad it was tough, but in the end it was sweet!

Please have 1 intimate chapter?
schedule May 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
aaaaahhh it's so great! I LOVE IT! awesome fic! very interesting. I'm glad it wasn't all just about UST, there was a lot of thought and emotion and plot in this fic.

what happens next? sequel, please! I want to know why Severus is so sad...I feel there is something he is not telling Harry...pelase include more info in the sequel, i want to see Harry defeat Voldemort and lead a happy life with Severus...=)
person Jien
schedule May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Would definitely love a sequel (Especially if they did that memory thing and Snape will never get his memories back >:D)
schedule May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo not complete!!! I have read this story over the last several days and totally love the storyline. Those first several chapters where Snape kissed Harry and invaded his space were sexy as all get out. Really awesome tension. And I loved how Snape practically jumped Harry as soon as there was a viable solution to take care of the Voldemort sensing his emotions problem. Snape wants Harry just as desperately as Harry wants him... I really like that.

I also liked how Harry kept looking at Snape throughout their whole time together. I think that would be perfect to come in as a way to save the memory of their time together since Snape's will probably be lost. Maybe the left behind torn clothes will give a clue lol.

You also haven't taken care of Hermione and her attraction to Draco. She hasn't taken her potion and wasn't Draco's reaction to his own potion interesting? Would like to get into some of his thoughts too :)

Continue!!!!
schedule May 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG you can NOT leave it there! thats so mean to leave it there! I want to know how Harry blasts Voldy's face off (oops sorry that was violent) and will Sev and Harry get back together? There's so much more to this story!!!!! Please write more!!!

Kit
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, long chappie and it covered a lot too. ron is as usual an utter git. mio, sigh, seriously, but i can understand her worry though. so will that new thought projection thingie only work on sev or will it work on anyone if har wants it bad enough?
i'm glad har and sev got their night (which was scorching by the way) but i would have though half a loaf is worse than none. will har be able to let it lay knowing what being in bed with sev is like? i hope they can get that memory thingie working cause sev is in so much more danger than usual thanks to that set of memories.
as for a sequel it'll depend on how this one ends and when.
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely want more, that was an awesome chapter!!!
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want a sequel!!!! That was just too good not to continue it!
person Janna
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Please continue the story.