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Holy fuck, that was a great story. I seriously hope and pray you write a sequel, because you are a fantastic author... That was seriously hot, you should be proud of yourself ;)

Hi there :) Firstly I want to say that I love the premise of this story and the ideas behind it and found them to be very believable. There are a few grammar errors in the writing but that can happen when you're going with the flow and it's easy to miss them on the read through I think. Secondly i have o say that yes, you need to do a sequel. This is a story that is clearly unfinished and yu could go a long way with the relationship, how they try and snatch moments here and there and how Severus copes with dealing with Voldemort, and if Hrmione finds the charm she is looking for (although they could just use the Pensieve really...) There is great potential to turn this into an epic love story if you have the time for it. I really enjoyed it :)

It has been 4 months, when will the sequel come out? Amazing story want to continue reading!

Great story! I really hope you continue!

sequel?

you know, for someone working on emotional control... har's were sorta completely OUT of control. I mean, it's great they got their lemon and resolved some of the UST but really, har needs to be MUCH more careful than that. He's going to see snape in far worse sitch's and he's got to be able to roll with it.

This was a great story. Very well written. A sequel is a must!

Loved it! I love psychological topics being explored in stories (and the UST and hot smut is awesome as well! ;)
A continuation/sequel would much appreciated....

I definitely want to see a sequel! I want them to end up happy together and Controlled Emotions just didn't really end that way. So please write a sequel! I loved the smut scene though, it was awesome!

This was absolutely brilliant. I love the story's originality. The characters are fantastically in-character. I noticed some minor grammatical errors throughout the story (mostly comma splices and instances where there should have been a comma before the end-quotation mark) but it was still easy to read and the errors didn't detract too much from the story. It was very intelligently written and I couldn't stop reading-- I read the whole thing in one sitting. I hope you decide to write a sequel-- I'm very curious to know how Harry and Severus' relationship continues, and also whether Hermione gives any more thought to her "anger" with Draco. Thank you so much!

Ta,
Artemis