rate_review Reviews

I loved this story so much But i want to know What happens when sev puts back hos memories. Have You written it somewere Else i han read What happens next?

i find many aspects of this story compelling. Thank you for writing it. I go now to read others of your work.

Wow! Last time I came across this I think you where only 4or 5 chapters in. It is turning out beautifully! I hope you continue working on it. That last chapter gripped my heart I'm terrified Harry truelly died... Please update soon!

KCK-Lumcer

So good. Please try to update soon. Severus & Harry are so sad and lost apart. They really do complete each other.

I've loved this story from beginning to now. It's taken me only two days to read this, and I'm really excited about what is coming next, although I'm a bit more apprehensive about it.
I did hav eto giggle a bit when ron inhaled the fumes from the potion andmwas taken to the hospital wing, 'hermoine grabbed ron's wasit and led hm away'...have to say that I'm sure that ron followed happily... ;)

I hope that your trouble isn't due to some harsh reviews, 'cause I have read some pretty bad stories, grammatically speaking. YOU are not amoung them. I love that you have put such work and research into your story! Most, myself included, just wing it. Thank you for sharing such a wonderfully imaginative stories with us, I hope that we will have an ending soon!

I first want to say that I enjoyed the first part of your story. This next part does have me confused though. It seems as though Harry is dead. If that is the case, please please add a MCD warning to the summary! As much as I enjoy this story so far, I don't like to read major character death and I know there are others out there like that too. It is really well written, so you shouldn't second guess your abilities, I just have this thing for the HEA.

Can't wait to read more!! Exellent story!! I do hope there's a happy ending, i'm a sticker for those!! Go Sev and go Harry!! Ps if anyone can point me to stories that are 'the same', please do!

first, i think you're brave to post anyway, despite your misgivings.
however, that prolog was a little scary in that it seems to hit that har died... i loath sad endings so i may not end up reading more. i'll probably check it out every three or four chappies just to see if i was right but that's all.
anyway, good luck and if this prolog was anything to go by, i don't think you have much to worry about.

That was all sorts of spicy and hot. NICE!

Really enjoyed reading this, stayed awake all night^^ Had a little trouble with the last few chapters, but I often struggle when it comes to romantic scenes so that's just down to me I think. All in all, great work. I hope you keep writing.