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At first I was like, WTH?! But as I kept reading, I realized that it's actually a very compelling story. Please continue! I never thought I'd be this into a BDSM-style relationship, but I'm fully invested into this iteration of the Albus Severus/Scorpius relationship.

...I can't belive that Harry and Draco are dead! Poor Albus! wow this story is shaking up fast. Can I ask you a question? Will Albus and scor be together in the end? Or have you not decided yet? Is it wrong that I hope they get together? lol.

As always another brilliant chapter. I can't wait for the next update!!

Wow what a great bunch of updates! Can't wait for more!! This story is getting better and better.

I love this story, can't wait to read more

Personally, I'm not sure what to think. I keep going back and forth on this story. I enjoy your writing, but the subject matter has gotten so dark and Al has no allies. I tend to overall dislike completely forced or Stockholm-esque relationships. I adore angst and h/c, but I want there to be a rescuer. I tend to have an issue with love interest and evil doer being the same person, though I realize that is a personal preference, and that is what this is feeling like.

This is your story and I am not sure exactly where you are taking it, but I don't want Al to turn to the dark side. I want there to be a light at the end of the tunnel, so to speak. I will probably be sticking with this story a bit longer, but at present, it just leaves me depressed and uncomfortable. For me at least, it is definitely provoking a reaction.

I knew it! I knew it! Bloody hell this chapter gave me the god damned willies! Poor Albus! Poor Scorpius, since I know the brat isn't doing this on his own accord, at least that's my silent hope. Anyway love the story, even though it is creepy. Update soon

I'm glad you finally updated. This chapter was great. I'm very pleased with how flowing the story is so far. Your choice of songs for each chapter has been brilliant as well. Your plot line is like none I have read before and I can't wait for each update as I know I will not be disappointed as each chapter so far has been better and better. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here. Keep the great work coming! :)

Oh my god I can't wait for the next update!!! I am so completely hooked to this story already! I love the way you portray Albus and his feelings and thoughts. It's all beautifully wrote as well. I can't wait to see what happenes next!

This story is great. So far it has been excellently written and the storyline that is unfolding is very interesting. I just can't wait for the next chapter! Please add me to the mailing list :)
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