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for The Descent of Magic

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Rumor? What rumor!? It's that Malfoy is gay... right? Yeah... I'm right... right? arrggg!!!! More soon!!!
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Astoria is going to tell the world that Draco is gay, isn't she?
person SP777
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

1. Despite the talk about house elves, curses & what nots..there is
still the underlying[?] story between fathers & sons and Draco proved
he is too caught up in his father's ways to think 'clearly' and learn..really
learn from Lucius' mistakes.

2. I hope Draco does come up with something about the curse, maybe that solution
will help decide he will want to do something more productive in life.

3. Remember the Coven on AFF? Were you a member?
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I can't wait for more!
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NOW i know why you won't willing to heal har by muggle means, it was a plot device (face plams myself. a true 'well dah' moment.) Was the curse effecting the whole knee or rooted to har's person. for instance, if he had gone muggle and had a prosthetic put in, would it have effected that too?

heh, draco doesn't quite know what to do with himself when har isn't fighting back. He's forced to respond and think more honestly rather than just reacting. it's fun to watch. I rather enjoy how he's managing har as well.
person Mehla_Seraphim
schedule May 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
At first I didn't like this story. Not a fan of the super dysfunctional Draco and Scorpius dynamic or of the Draco is super duper racist still type of story. I keep reading your fics because they do get better even if I feel that start is going to be a fic I won't like. I haven't been disappointed yet lol. But I like that Draco's a bit more mellow in the last couple of chapters.
schedule May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want Draco to find a way to fix Harry's leg!!!! wan' it wan' it wan' it... ok... now I sound like a whining 3 year old lol. But that would be really awesome.
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I wonder if Draco can come up with some potions that will actually heal the knee? Update soon!
schedule May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
by all that's holy, i do believe har and malfoy are actually good for each other! *falls over in shock.
har needs someone to help him take better care of himself... without taking over and malfoy needs someone who will take him seriously, which har is doing.
my goodness, mio is quite a prejudiced, opinionated little thing in this one huh? As for hugo i wonder if ANYTHING can cause a 16 yr old to pull their head outta their butt and stop acting like a total twat. >> ... well, outside of a war type situation anyway.
schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Seems Draco, Hermione and Harry has made a good start. Excellent update!