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for The Descent of Magic

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor scorpy. He's got that idea very firmly locked into his mind, just like Astoria has her idea of draco locked in hers. There seem to be an awful lot of lock minded people in this fic. har seems to be the only one willing to expand his views unreservedly. I mean, draco is, but he's also horribly confused with all these odd, left over uncertainties lurking about him. I think it's good har makes him feel and it's even better that he brings har to life and (for the mo at least) is willing to lessen his pain until a more permanent fix can be found... or developed. har's simple genuineness is good for him. it's building up his self esteem again.
i wonder what it will take to crack open the others minds a bit.
schedule May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like that Draco wants to feel emotions and is gravitating towards Harry because he brings out his emotions... even though Draco doesn't seem to understand what those emotions are lol
person dominique1
schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i know cause am in pain every day yet i try not to over do it i hope that scropy and draco find a middle ground
person RRose
schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love Draco's small expressions and reactions to Harry's happiness or at least happy reactions. I hope Draco and Scorpius can eventually form a better relationship.
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good luck with scorpy har... you'll need it. :P

interesting... they appear to have roused each other's battle blood and each other in general. nothing like a serious challenge to shake you out of complacency.

as for astoria... *studies her with interest. wow, who knew 'utter prat' was contagious and she seems to have a very bad case.

Still, draco's battle blood is up too, so while he might not enjoy the bumps she sends his way I'm sure he's going to relish the challenge of the journey, both to get har's theory accepted and to get har's health (and possibly har himself) back.

scorpy has become a rather side issue atm.
person dominique1
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i so love this i kind of hope that the people that stay will listen and try
person dominique1
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor harry i know his pain always in pain taking medication that will work than stop
person dominique1
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
all love it if draco heals harrys knee
person dominique1
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i so want harry to stand by draco and draco to get harry to walk again without so much pain and scrop to be better to his dad and draco and harry to get together
person SP777
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #11...

To say in a few simple words..."Draco has gotten his groove back."

and "Harry is rising from the ashes."