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June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #19...
You know, THIS is the chapter where Draco could do a happy dance
from not caving into Scorpius' spoildness. He conducted himself
beautifully! :-) Good job author(ess).
For a moment I thought you was going to have Harry go outside and
take off like a rocket...running. It was something I visualized him
doing once his knee was healed. I know I would, with my bad ankles.
That's one of the things I miss doing, which is running {somewhat].
Anyway, nice chapter.
You know, THIS is the chapter where Draco could do a happy dance
from not caving into Scorpius' spoildness. He conducted himself
beautifully! :-) Good job author(ess).
For a moment I thought you was going to have Harry go outside and
take off like a rocket...running. It was something I visualized him
doing once his knee was healed. I know I would, with my bad ankles.
That's one of the things I miss doing, which is running {somewhat].
Anyway, nice chapter.
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June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, great idea about squib and magic children theory, it is absolutly believable and I like Draco s and Harry s different perspectives, nature and behaviour.
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June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
gah... a memory effecting spell in there as well. no wonder har's knee was never fixed... still that would vidicate him to mio a bit more. anyone working on the leg would be fighting that... and if they didn't know they were trying to fight that it wouldn't give them much chance to fix it. so who'd har piss off to get that treatment.
i thought bezoar were anti poison not anti all things tainted. and this line was a bit confusing. 'Potter firmed his legs around his leg as he extended it' Firmed his muscles around his leg? around his knee?
at any rate. it sounds like har might be closer to claiming his malfoy than he thinks.
i thought bezoar were anti poison not anti all things tainted. and this line was a bit confusing. 'Potter firmed his legs around his leg as he extended it' Firmed his muscles around his leg? around his knee?
at any rate. it sounds like har might be closer to claiming his malfoy than he thinks.
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June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #18..
I couldn't help the thought that came to me while reading the beginning of
the chapter, Draco has never been in love before and that's kind of sad, especially
when you don't recognize the beginnings of an attraction...and think it's
indigestion. :-)
But, he definitely comes through in the end, doesn't he? He got rid of the curse.
You know, you aught to classify this story as a romance/drama.
I couldn't help the thought that came to me while reading the beginning of
the chapter, Draco has never been in love before and that's kind of sad, especially
when you don't recognize the beginnings of an attraction...and think it's
indigestion. :-)
But, he definitely comes through in the end, doesn't he? He got rid of the curse.
You know, you aught to classify this story as a romance/drama.
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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think this was an interesting chapter. I cannot wait to find out what the warlocks true motivations were. Why did they choose to attack Potter like that and where are they hiding? I hope that someone decides to have a conversation with Teddy about the werewolf thing. I look forward to the next chapter.
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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad they are making progress on Harry's knee. Update soon!
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June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good grief, Astoria is completely ridiculous. Still, at least he's managed to get her to stand back.
hmmmm, i wonder if recruiting Ted will help... i suppose it can't really hurt. will Ted eventually stop ducking his girlfriend... before she gives up on him?
Why hasn't har spoken to Al?
heh, i wonder how har will go about snagging his Malfoy to be. I look forward to seeing that. ^^
hmmmm, i wonder if recruiting Ted will help... i suppose it can't really hurt. will Ted eventually stop ducking his girlfriend... before she gives up on him?
Why hasn't har spoken to Al?
heh, i wonder how har will go about snagging his Malfoy to be. I look forward to seeing that. ^^
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June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, maybe Scorpius isn't as intelligent as his father. Setting yourself on fire is pretty stupid! Loved it!
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June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #17...
Okay, I know I'm not tripping, that chapter was shorter than usual,
because I don't read THAT fast.
But, anyway, it's good to see Draco get one over Astoria for a change
AND I hope Teddy makes progress with the boys.
Okay, I know I'm not tripping, that chapter was shorter than usual,
because I don't read THAT fast.
But, anyway, it's good to see Draco get one over Astoria for a change
AND I hope Teddy makes progress with the boys.
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June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I'm guessing that Harry is aware of his sexuality whereas Draco has never considered his? I also would love to know why Teddy is avoiding the topic of Victorie. Is it possible that he's afraid of passing on the Werewolf gene like Harry thought previously or is he worried about having children. Is he actually gay and not sure how to tell her that he loves her as a person but isn't attracted to her? I look forward to your next chapter.